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Hi, my name is kimmy
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you messed up

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By kimbe Send DollMail
Created: 2008-04-17 19:29:51 All stories by kimbe
This is a story about a girl named Vivianna, who is hard headed and selfish. I know sometimes stories start off with once upon a time… or one day …, but my stories different.

Vivianna was walking in the neighborhood they call the hood, with some of her friends. She saw “the finest boy in America” looking at her, and he told her to come to him. She ditched her friends, and that’s exactly what she did. They were laughing and talking until her dad approached them. She thought her father was going to whip her behind, but he didn’t he whipped the finest boy in Americas. (Which is kind of funny)

When Vivianna and her father went home, her father gave her a long talk about “those boys out there are no good for you Viv, all they want is one thing and one thing only. (I bet you know what that is) Vivianna said “but dad he is the finest boy in America. her father said “I don’t care if he was a millionaire, he ain’t no good.”

So the next day comes. she did it again, the finest boy in America told her to come and she ditched her friends and came, and again her father showed up and didn’t lay a hand on Vivianna but the finest boy in Americas. When they got home they had the same talk about “they only want one thing and one thing only.” The next day again the finest boy in America told her to come here. She looked both ways to see if her father was there, he wasn’t so she came, and sure enough he approached and beat up the finest boy in America. They went home and had the exact same talk.

The next day came again. Viv just won’t listen, this time she tried to sneak to the finest boy in America. They were talking and laughing until Viv realized that her dad didn’t come. So she told the finest boy in America she gotta bounce. he said “why” she said “you know how my father always shows up and beat’s you up.” he said “yea” Vivianna said “well he didn’t show up today”. so Vivianna ran as fast as she could to get home, but she was to late… TO BE CONTINUED…..
  

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shar2008

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Posted On: April 17, 2008
Alright....it sounds ok...

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