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Hi, my name is Farm
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there goes the sun. [poem]

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By Farm Send DollMail
Created: 2009-07-13 19:21:42 All stories by Farm
Where will we go when the sun burns out?

I don't know, but I still have some doubt.

Will we perish and waste away?

What will we do when night turns to day?

--

So many questions, none have been solved.

We hug the dirt in our hands as we crawl.

Where is the grass? It died without sun.

No more trees, or oxygen. None.

--

Here comes the sun, The Beatles once said.

Did they know when it died we'd be dead?

But we don't need to worry, we don't need to fear,

Because the sun will live for five billion years.

[notes]

A/C: This poem is about how we take everything for granted.
  

Member Comments  
xpOkErFaCe

19/Female
GA
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Posted On: August 24, 2009
Very beautiful

*Poke her
Savage

102/Male
United Kingdom
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Posted On: July 14, 2009
This is amazing, all of your work is.
Farm

103/Female
Canada
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Posted On: July 14, 2009
Well, that's okay. (:

and, thanks Crazy. 8D
amanda__x

21/Female
MD
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Posted On: July 14, 2009
i guess because i didnt see the point of the poem

until you wrote so at the end.

plus im not big on poems that rhyme.

-amanda
pinkshine05

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: July 13, 2009
Well, I liked it. It was inspiring. Please continue, Katee.

xoxo Crazy
Farm

103/Female
Canada
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Posted On: July 13, 2009
Well, that's okay.

I'd appreciate it if you said WHY you don't like it.

And thanks, bella_girl.
bella_girl

19/Female
Fredericktown, PA
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Posted On: July 13, 2009
This is awesome.amanda x doesn't know what she's talkin 'bout!
amanda__x

21/Female
MD
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Posted On: July 13, 2009
i dont like it. nothing against you, i just dont.

-amanda
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