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Hi, my name is Naiel
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 3.5 with 4 vote(s)
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| Created: 2007-08-24 11:02:21 |
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Before I could even step out the door my naive brother Charles ran to me and asked where was I going. I use to always answer none of your dam biz, but not today cause this was a good day. " I'm going to meet John duh." I answered. Charles then looked at me with that annoyed look. My brother never did like John. " Look i told you to leave that punk alone he's not good for you and you know it Naiel." He said hold ing my arm because now i was trying to walk away. " Damnit Charles don't tell me how to live my life I told you Rhode was no good for you, but you didn't listen." I said back. But the look in my brothers eyes told me that I whent to far. " Oh Charles i'm sorry," I confronted. " You know what go on meet John go," He waved his hand to the door.
I headed on my way to my benz after saying another sorry. Rhode was Charles ex-girlfriend they really loved each other. But then Rhode claimed she was pregant and to say i was surprised that Charles wanted to be the father. When the baby came they got a D.N.A test because there was rumors that Rhode had slept around. I guess it was true cause Charles was proved not the father. And his best friend Mike was.
As I was saying i was on my way to my benz. It only took me 3 minute to get to Pebble beach where John was waiting for me. When I spotted him my hermones jumped i wanted to be with him so bad. " Hey Naiel over here," He said motioning for me to come over with his hands. Like I don't see yo sexy sellf over there i thought. I hopped out of my benz and walked over to him. he was lying on a beach towel without a shirt and no underwear. I then noticed that no one else was wearing any thing else. What the hel i thought. " Hey what up boo join me down here?" he asked. I looked at him with horror. "You invited me to dam nude beach?" I asked trying not to seem angry. John then just looked at me.
" Answer my fu*king question John?" I asked." Yeah, but was the big deal i thought you like seeing me naked?" He asked with a smirk. " Yeah i do, but not other people around here," i answered pointing at the nude people walking and waveing.
" Then join me and chill out some let ya hair down." he replied. I kicked dirt in his face and turned to leave." Naiel wait," He yelled while getting up. I couldn't believe him go invite me to a nude beach like this. Before John made it to me I was already in my benz and out of the beach parking lot. I was crying now so hard I didn't know what to do. but I did know not to talk to him again. When i got home there was a red mercades in my home parking spot. My brother truck was still there so i knew it was one of his friends. As i came to the door i heared laughter. I opened the door to see on the sofa. A little boy playing with a small toy and my brother laughing with Rhode.
To be continued
hey what up everyone sorry it was so short |
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