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Welcome To The Haunted Mansion {01}

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By LeeWolf10 Send DollMail
Created: 2011-07-24 20:46:32 All stories by LeeWolf10
Thank you for the suggestion, Shannon. This will be fun to write. Here's the beginning of a TDP fic that Spatula had offered me to write. Plus I gets to mess around with the Bonita dollmaker more. =D

~**~

“Woot! Yeah! Kick the crap outta that fire pig thing!” Lee cheered, pumping her fist into the air while her other hand held a cup full of Pepsi. There she was in the spacious living room, sprawled out on one of the couches, watching Erin play The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess. “Ooh, that’s gotta hurt! Come on Erin, it’s a pushover! You can beat this!”

Erin was in the zone. Sure it was only the second dungeon of the game and therefore an easy boss, but with Lee cheering her on, Erin felt pumped. With an Indian war cry of her own, she slashed at the boss, finally destroying it. It disappeared and left a Heart Container.

“Yeah! How was that Lee?” Erin spun around to face her friend, but Lee was staring at Erin. “What?”

“Was…was that a war cry?” Lee asked, eyes wide.

“Well…yeah. It was.”

Immediately, Lee put her Pepsi on the coffee table and jumped up, crushing Erin into a hug. “Playing LoZ and defeating an enemy with a war cry! I have never been more proud!” she sobbed.

Suddenly, Shannon stormed into the living room, a fork in her hand. “Hey! Can’t a girl watch Buffy the Vampire Slayer and eat her pie without a TV show’s camera crew knocking at the Palace doors? Gosh!”

Erin and Lee both gave Shannon a quizzical look. “…what?”

“There’s a camera crew knocking at the doors. You guys seriously can’t hear that?” Shannon tossed her fork onto the coffee table and motioned for them to follow her. The two friends shared a curious look before following McSpatula toward the front doors of the Palace.

Sure enough, as the girls walked down the stairs to the foyer of the Palace, they could hear loud knocking coming from the large double doors. Strangely, Tink was sitting on one of the small couches by the door near a window, gazing out at the people knocking. Her giant cookie was next to her, and every so often she would pet it or say “Hush. It’ll be ok.”

Erin, Shannon, and Lee all stared at Tink. “Uh, Tink?” Erin asked. “You know there are people at the door, right?”

Tink looked over to her friends. She smiled and nodded. “Yes. I do.”

“So…why haven’t you answered the door?”

“Giant Cookie doesn’t like camera crews. He believes they work for the Weasel.” She stroked her cookie. “Isn’t that right? Don’t worry, I’m not gonna let them in.”

Shannon rolled here eyes. “/Everyone/ works for the Weasel nowadays. It’s a shame, really.”

“If they work for the Weasel, I’ll take care of this.” Lee strode over and opened one of the massive doors to the Palace, Shannon, Erin, and Tink peering out at the camera crew from behind her. “Can I help you?”

One of the crewmen grinned. “Hello! We’re from a reality dating show that is going to air soon and heard that a bunch of teenage girls live here. Is this true?”

Lee narrowed her eyes in annoyance. “No, because me and the three girls behind me are definitely not teenagers. What do you want, creeper?”

The man still grinned at Lee. “We want you girls to be contestants on our dating show!”

Erin gave a dry cough, Shannon facepalmed, and Tink stuck out her tongue. “You…have got to be kidding me,” Lee said slowly. “You want us to be on a dating show?”

“Absolutely!” The man exclaimed.

“Where boys come up and pick which one of us they want to date?”

“Yup!”

“And they pretend to care about our personalities when instead they’re shallow enough to judge us on how we look but only ask about what we like and dislike so that the viewers think that they’re sincere boys?”

“Uh…”

“And then we’re supposed to act like we’re so excited that some so-called sweet guy who is in fact a shallow loser chose one of us to date?”

“Well…”

“And then the others who weren’t chosen are supposed to get angry at the one who was chosen, therefore starting a catfight and breaking up our friendship so we can be made fools on national television?”

“When you put it like that…”

Lee raised an eyebrow. “Well?”

The man seemed baffled. “We…we just thought a bunch of teenage girls would love an opportunity to be chosen by one of our sincerely sweet guy contestants. Isn’t that what every girl dreams about?”

The three girls behind Lee let out a low, almost shocked “ooh.” Lee’s eye twitched as she glared at the man.

The man mistakenly took Lee’s silence as her considering the offer. “Well? What do you say?”

The brunette Romanian narrowed her eyes. “Alright girls. Get the forks.”

~**~

After the camera crew had run off screaming at the four girls throwing forks, Erin trudged back into the living room and grabbed the controller. “Alright. Let’s get back to Twilight Princess.”

Shannon and Tink sat down on the couch, ready to watch Erin play. But Lee took the controller out of Erin’s hands. “Hey!”

Putting the controller back on the coffee table, Lee grinned. “Guys. I have an idea!”

“Oh god,” Erin moaned as she sat next to Shannon, covering her face with her hands. “Lee, we talked about this. Whenever you get an idea, someone ends up in jail, someone ends up in the hospital, and someone ends up dead.”

Lee waved Erin’s complaint away. “Please. Not every time. Besides, the people in this plan are already dead.”

Tink and Shannon paled a bit, and Erin looked up with startled eyes. “Lee…what exactly are you thinking of?”

“You’re gonna love this idea!”

“I really don’t think I’m gonna love this idea.”

“It’s genius!”

“Last time you said that, we were swimming back to shore instead of riding on a boat.”

“It’s the greatest idea ever!”

“And last time you said THAT, the plane crashed on Madagascar and we did not meet friendly partying lemurs.”

“And it involves you, me, Shannon, Tink, Allora, and Sore!”

Shannon and Tink looked up nervously. “Uh, can we take a rain check?” Tink asked, holding her giant cookie close to her.

“Absolutely not. Besides, it’s not raining.”

Shannon sighed. “Alright. I give. What’s your idea.”

Lee grinned. “We’re gonna make our own reality show where we go explore a haunted area!”

Everyone was silent as they stared at Lee, confusion on their faces. “Why?” Erin asked, giving Lee an incredulous look. “Why would we do that?”

“It sounds fun, doesn’t it?” Lee grabbed a silver video camera off of the table next to the TV. “We’ll record it like one of those real reality shows that those kids go on and freak out about everything that moves and every little noise and all that!” She smiled at her friends. “And I know just the haunted place to go.”

“Oh really? Where would that be?” Erin asked.

Lee’s grin turned into an evil smirk. “The one place authors and stories alike fear the most. The one place where there’s sure to be some strange occurrences.” She pointed out of the window, and with her words came a random flash of lighting and clap of thunder. “Deadview Manor! The graveyard of forgotten characters!”
  

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LeeWolf10

20/Female
Romania
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Posted On: July 25, 2011
VVVV Erin's gonna write it Evily. XDDD

~*Lee*~
evily_sweet

22/Female
Djibouti
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Posted On: July 25, 2011
Poor camera crew >: I thought the idea of you guys on a dating show would have been freaking hilarious. Instead of the GIRLS looking terrible, you would have made the guys all uncomfortable and stuff and in the end they would have looked stupid. Just a thought. (:

LeeWolf10

20/Female
Romania
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
You're not, don't worry cousin. I'm working on the Guardians series for us all. =DDD

You still want his name to be Shayne, right?

~*Lee*~
awardwinningau

18/Female
Liechtenstein
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
Oh gosh...this'll be...interesting.

DM shall be sent.

POOR CAMERA CREW XDD

*Erin*
xXHemlochTeaXx

19/Female
Morrisville, VA
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
Oh my goodness. XD

I have some terrible characters that live in that place... I'll be sure to send you my list soon.

+Allora
Xx_Rini_xX

105/Female
Antarctica
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
haha thought so.

-sobs- Cale is going to kill us all.... ='(

Why did I ever make a character like him!
LeeWolf10

20/Female
Romania
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
I DO LOVE THEM XDDD

~*Lee*~
Xx_Rini_xX

105/Female
Antarctica
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
Awesome... I had to throw those last ones in there, even if I hadn't wrote about them before... i drew them a long long time ago and i thought, "HEY! LEE WOULD LOVE THIS!"
LeeWolf10

20/Female
Romania
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
Thanks Tink, got it. =D

~*Lee*~
Xx_Rini_xX

105/Female
Antarctica
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
DM sent

*~Tink~*
Rofflz

105/Female
China
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
Lollio the camera crew was forked XD

Sounds creepy, Deadview Manor, you wouldn't ever catch me walking into that place XP

-Andi
crumbula2

30/Female
Palo Cedro, CA
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
Alright sent my DM. :]
Xx_Rini_xX

105/Female
Antarctica
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
okie dokie!
LeeWolf10

20/Female
Romania
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
I will need you, Allora, Shannon, Erin, and Sore to make up a list of some forgotten characters that may want to come and haunt you. Just DM them to meh.

~*Lee*~
Xx_Rini_xX

105/Female
Antarctica
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Posted On: July 24, 2011
ugh STUPID TDP! MY COMMENT ISN'T PROFANE!!!!!

BUT ANYWAYS.....

.... deadview manor....? -gulp- bu-but I pr-probably have a t-ton of characters th-there.....

WHERE IS THE STUPID RAIN WHEN YOU NEED IT!!!!!

love the story! keep it up! if you need some characters I have tons that are .... forgotten... if you need them.

*~Tink~*
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