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Hi, my name is Aeroo
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Wants it all(song)

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By Aerokine Send DollMail
Created: 2009-02-16 14:01:44 All stories by Aerokine
Begging for bruises, begging for more,

Wanting the pain to cut to the core.

No matter how much it isn't enough,

You little masochist, you think you're so tough.

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Masochist, masochist, oh she loves the pain.

Masochist, masochist, wants her blood and brains.

What happens when no one else takes your fall?

You're the girl who wants it all.

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You shove torn hands into the soil,

Breaking your back from endless toil.

Lining the skin with razor blades,

Doing nothing that you're bade.

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Flaunting the grief that comes with your life,

Showing the world all your anguished strife.

You don't want their pity or patronized stares,

You want their fists tearing chunks of your hair.

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Masochist, masochist, oh she loves her pain,

Masochist, masochist, puts her fingers in the flames,

What happens when no one else takes you fall,

You're the girl who wants it all!

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Beat and bleed and tie and chain,

And cut and scour and give her the pain,

You know it, you know it, you know what she wants,

You know it, you know it, but still you can't!

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Masochist, masochist, no longer can she stall,

Masochist, masochist, doomed to take her fall,

Dropping away into the pit,

Extinguishing the lights you lit,

You're the girl who wants it all.

]]FIN.

AN: Really craapy song I wrote on the spur of the moment. I don't have anything against masochists. Am a mild one myself. This song is meant to illustrate the way people publicize their pain, put it out for everyone to see, essentially those who believe that the pain is a way to gain popularity and status.

Ratings and constructive crit. appreciated!



--Aeroo
  

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Aerokine

103/Female
South Georgia And The South Sandwich Islands
All My Stories
Posted On: February 23, 2009
O, hey. Thank you. I bet you could write pretty good songs, just focus on how it would sound out loud and write rhymes down.

It... sort of works. Sometimes. Other times I write songs that make me barf. The only reason you people think I'm good is because I only post my good stuff! XD



--Aeroo
Aerokine

103/Female
South Georgia And The South Sandwich Islands
All My Stories
Posted On: February 16, 2009
Noooo. It's easy.

(shifty eyes)
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