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Hi, my name is Judith
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The deaman in her

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Created: 2004-12-11 20:56:11 All stories by
Sitted next to Evan, a beutiful yong girl by the name of Judith started coughing.

'u ok?' Evan asked.

'ya (she cought). i think,' she said.'im gona go to the rest room.'

'k'

She entered the rest room and looked in the mirror. She could not belive what she saw.

Her beutiful dark black hair was now turning white, and her tan skin was now gray. Her dark brown eyes were nom light purple. Her mini dress was ripping. She screamed and fainted. Evan ran in as soon as he heared the scream and opened the door to the rest room.

'Judith,' he said. 'are u ok.'

To Be Continued...
  

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gothicboy1

20/Male
United Kingdom
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Posted On: January 17, 2011
Lol, nachomama1512, did you really spell 'Really' wrong?

Anyways, Author of This Story. [since you don't really have a user name that I can see] it is spelt Demon.

And it would probably be better if you'd made this longer and put quotations around the people talking. Add some more descriptions and run it through a spellchecker program.

A lot of people are going to hate on you for having poor grammer and spelling. It just takes a little time to write really good stories.

I'm sure if you took a little more time on this you could make it brilliant.

-Kyle
nachomama1512

17/Female
Tokelau
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Posted On: January 16, 2011
UM ARE YALL LIKE 7 >< ITS SPELLED DEMON AND POSSESES

LIKE OMG I DONT REALY CARE BUT REALY o.o
colobo

21/Female
Jefferson City, MO
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Posted On: September 27, 2010
Dude. It's spelled demon.
wolfgirl264

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 29, 2010
a deman is like a devil.it posses someone.
Aerokine

103/Female
South Georgia And The South Sandwich Islands
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Posted On: February 15, 2009
What is a dea man?

It sounds dirty...
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