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Hi, my name is Maria and Hector
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The Princess and the Slave Boy

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By Sarin Send DollMailVisit Website
Created: 2006-09-25 23:31:51 All stories by Sarin
Once upon a time, there was a princess named Maria. She was so elegeant and was royalty. Her mother, Queen Jackline, but her father, King Christopher,had died a year ago. But hre mother was very strict and never expected anything to go wrong with her child. One day when they were on a stroll, Maria was right behind her mother, when in the corner of her eye, she saw a young man. She turned her head, curious to know who it was. She saw a handsome, man with no shirt but only pants with holes in them. He looked up at her and stared into her eyes. She gave a small little smurk as he smiled right back to her. He bowed slightly, knowing that she was the princess. She figured that he was a slave. But she couldn't help but to keep staring at this magnificent looking man. He was so handsome she wasn't able to take her eyes off of him. They kept on smiling at eachother happily gazing into eachothers' eyes. That's when Maria heard a voice calling her name. She looked around wondering where it was coming from. She looked foward and saw her mother waving at her with wide eyes. Maria yelled, "sorry mother! I'm coming!" She quickly walked up to her mother while looking back at the slave boy. He stared at her and then heard a voice calling him. He saw his father, another slave. He said, "Hector, my son. How are you going to make a living when you're just staring at girls all day?" Hector looked at his short, round father and said, "sorry, father. I was just..... oh never mind. I'll just get back to work." He carried the wheelbarrel that was filled with dirt. He carried it back with his father behind him. Maria was taking a bath and was finally finished, clean and feeling fresh. She went to her room and began to brush her long beautiful shiny brown hair. The Queen walked in and said, "hello sweetheart. May I brush your hair?" Maria turned and said, "of course. I love when you brush my hair." She walked up to the chair next to Maria's and sat next to her. She began to brush when Maria turned and asked her mother, "mother, how come I can't pick the man that I want to wed?" Her mother sighed and said, "why must you ask these questions everyday?! I explained it to you already many times! You can't because it's the law!" Maria turned away from her and said, "I hate this law! It's rediculous!" Jackline walked out and said, "fine. Even though that's what you think, you still have to obey the rules. Good night, Maria!" She shut the door and Maria jumped onto her bed. She put the pillow against her face and screamed in anger. She fell asleep finally and woke up. She cleaned herself and said to her mother as soon as she got downstairs, "mommy, I'm sorry for the argument that occured last night. How about we take a stroll around again? Hmmmm?" The queen sighed and said, "okay. I forgive you." They hugged and left for there walk. That's when Maria saw the slave boy again! She said to her mother, "Oh mother, I'm gonna stay here for a while. Is that okay?" Jackline said, "sure. But be home soon!" Maria nodded and said, "okay!" She looked at the slave boy and waved. The slave boy placed down the wheelbarrel and wallked up to Maria and said, "hello there princess. How are you today?" She replied and said, "it's fine so far." He shrugged his shoulders and said, "soooo, would you like to see eachother secretly sometime?" Maria dropped her jaw but still smiling. She tapped her black frilly fan against his bare chest and said, "my, my, my. You're a little bad person aren't you?" Hector smiled and said, "yes. But I understand that you don't want to be with a slave, right?" She said, "well, sure! Of course I would want to be with you!" They smiled and said, "Great!" Maria smiled and said, "well, my name is Maria." He said, "my name is Hector!" She smiled and left. He watched her as she left with all of her grace. 'She's so beautiful', he thought. She snuck out that night and saw him waiting for her outside on the edge of the balcony. He grabbed her and they flew down. They both felt butterflies in their stomachs. They fled away and they went to the most beautiful places in the world. They went every night of erey week. the third week that they went out, Hector grabbed her and swung her around to face him. He forced himself strongly as he kissed her. She grabbed onto him and went on with it. He got off and said, "Maria. I love you so much! I would die for you. I know that our love is impossible, but I will love you no matter what happens. Please say that you love me too." She smiled and forced a kiss on him. She pushed him off and said, "I love you too! I need you in my life." They continued to kiss as they lowered down to the ground and made out all night. They were kissing when Maria opened her left eye and saw the clock tower. She saw that it was 1 56 am. She pushed him and said, "I must go now!" He said, "no! You mustn't! Please no! This is the most magical moment in my life! You must not go! Please!" She said, "I'm sorry, but I must. Otherwise my mother will punish you and me and we won't be able to see eachother in our lives! So please take me home." He frowned and stood up. He picked her up and said, "all right. But you have to promise that you'll see me again." She stood up and said, "of course, my love. I will never dissappoint you!" They kissed and he walked her home to the castle. Maria and Hector climbed up the balcony and they said good night to eachother. They kissed and went away. She fell asleep and awoke the next morning. She saw her mother at the dining table and ate her breakfast with her parent. The servants cleared up the table after and Queen Jackline went out. She had a secret meeting with someone herself. She hired a spy. He was hired to spy on Maria. She payed him so much, just to go into her daughter's business. That night, when Hector snuck over to the balcony, the spy began to watch them. Maria climbed over and they jumped off. They fled out of the area and ran to the special place where they always went off to. Hector kissed her and she sat down. She pulled him down to the ground slowly and made out in there almost all night. The spy continued to watch and saw them run back together back to the castle. They climbed up and they gave their last kiss for the night. She walked back into her room and slept. Queen Jackline was pacing around, waiting for the news. The spy ran in and told her everything that he saw. She was furious with the news. Maria woke up and saw her mother walk in while she was eating her breakfast. Her mother took a deep breath and walked up to Maria. She said, "good morning, sweetheart. How did you sleep?" Maria coughed knowing that she really didn't sleep through the night. She replied, "wonderfully!" She was finally done with her meal. She went to the place where she sees Hector and met him there. She said, "hello Hector! I can't wait to sow you the new place where we're going tonight!" He held her hands and said, "me too!" They kissed and she went home. He continued to work with his father. She ran home and was so excited for the night to come. He came over, jumped down, and she lead him to a place. It was a little cottage. It was so quiet, peaceful, and no one was there to come. She said, " I want to show you something." They sat down in there on the bed in front of a little fireplace. She took off her dress and stood there naked. Hector smiled and said, "do you really want to?" She nodded with a sexy look on her face. She layed on the soft bed and he layed on top of her. She slipped off his pants and dragged her right index finger on his sweaty muscular chest and she whispered, "pleasure me!" When they were done, she put her sleepy head on his chest and they fell asleep together. She woke up at 6 am. She quickly awakened and woke Hector up to get up and go home so that they won't get in trouble. They ran to the castle and they gave a good bye kiss. Right when she walked in from the balcony, she saw a shadow. She looked closely and saw who it was. It was her mother. "Mommy!" she said. "What are you doing?!" The queen stood up and said,"How dare you! You go with a slave boy! And sneak out of the castle?! You're a disgrace!" Maria said, "It's called love! You don't know what it is!" Jackline slapped Maria across her face. The mother said, "What kind of language do you speak to me with?! Your own mother!" Maria ran downstairs and said, "I hate this castle! I hate you!" She ran to the cottage and saw Hector there. He said, "what's going on? I heard that you're mother hired a spy. Is that true?!" She cried, "yes it is! I'm sorry. My mother is horrible!" She jumped on him and kissed him. He said, "what are you doing?" She replied, "let's leave! Let's go to a place where they will never find us. It's a great place called the Doll Palace!" He smiled and said, "Yes! But what about my father? What if he doesn't except it?" She said, "well, we're gonna have to try." He said, "yes. Okay, I'll try!" They ran to his home and gathered his stuff. His father ran in and said, "Hector! What are you doing?!" He replied, "I'm leaving with the one that I love, Maria!" She said, "Yes, we're leaving to a new place." He said, "I guess that I'll have to support you." They smiled with glee and said, "thank you so much!" He said, "I'll visit you two!" The couple ran off and traveled to the magical place. The queen Jackline never did find her or Hector her lover. They are now still living in The Doll Palace. The father visited like how he promised, and they got married and now have a family. They lived happily ever after!

The End!
  

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SeasonSweetMod

24/Female
Canada
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Posted On: April 24, 2008
Aww, that is so sweet. A bit difficult to read, since I have trouble reading things that are crammed together like that, but sweet.
wolfie_pink

23/Female
Chicago, IL
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Posted On: October 11, 2006
lol I'm commented this story seven times...well now eight!
wolfie_pink

23/Female
Chicago, IL
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Posted On: October 1, 2006
Hedwigs Revenge is if you any other people to comment on sexually orientated stories I know alot of people with story more sexually Orientated stuff and believe me they are MORE GRAPHIC! So if you think this story was way too sexual than damil me and I'll be glad to send out a list of people with stories based on JUST ABOUT S.E.X. and Ra pe. I'm sorry but I think this story was better than the other sick per verted ones I've read.

~Chell~
Cheerio__x3

21/Female
Huber Heights, OH
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Posted On: September 29, 2006
Its a really nice story.

Though its a little on the chessy side.

But if you keep working on it you'll have an awsome job someday.

I'd buy your books ;]

-Kris
wolfie_pink

23/Female
Chicago, IL
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Posted On: September 25, 2006
seriously someof you guys comment my stories and not once mentioned how bad my grammar/punctuation is? Why is that? Whatever it is just stop it?! This has to be the best romance ever....If I can understand it and more than one people understands it. I'm sure alot of people careless for grammar and punctuation. It's a story! I mean its not like it gonna get published as a book...I bet someday it will though THAT BE TTLY AWESOME! But guys come on! When I write a story I have (sp) marks every where!

~Chell~
SilverLily22

25/Female
Zionsville, IN
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Posted On: September 25, 2006
I hate to sound mean, but honestly this was cliched and poorly written. You need to work on your grammar and spelling, as well as your formatting. There are things called paragraphs that are desperately needed here. If you haven't already, look at the comment by Anonymous_skep. She has some good points.

If you work really hard, you can get better at writing. But it'll take work. Good luck!

~Silver~
Dollmaker1103

23/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: September 25, 2006
Gr8 Love It.
wolfie_pink

23/Female
Chicago, IL
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Posted On: September 25, 2006
best story eva
goth_p8

21/Female
San Jose, CA
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Posted On: September 12, 2006
ooooh, i love this storie..it was really really good..i hope yew win cuz its great..well good luck..
Anonymous_Skep

24/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: September 12, 2006
I have only 4 comments to make:

1)"Once upon a time, there was a princess named Maria. She was so elegeant and was royalty."

A princess who was royalty? Oh you don't say! Now there's some writing without redundancy.

2)"soooo, would you like to see eachother secretly sometime?"

He's so discreet. What witty banter your hero has. I'm sure everyone who read this would be turned on by his intelligence and bare chestedness.

3)'He said, "I guess that I'll have to support you."'

Yes, his father THE SLAVE is going to support them. Yes, that's so logical, I'm glad to know you proof-read so throughly.

4)"The queen Jackline never did find her or Hector her lover."

Yes, the Queen who could afford to hire a spy to follow her daughter on her midnight escapades but she can't find them now? You're so consistant.

You ought to be a ghost-writer for a cheap romance novelist when you grow up, all you have to do is learn to spell and use paragraphs.

--Skep
Lia3220

23/Female
Japan
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Posted On: September 11, 2006
Wow That was a great story!I love how he is a slave and then she is a princess!HEHE!

beebeeg101

23/Female
Miami, FL
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Posted On: September 10, 2006
wow !!! that was gr8 very passionate u should become a writer for love stories!!
Ice_Lolly

26/Female
Johnson City, TN
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Posted On: September 9, 2006
This is really good Sarin. You are very talented. I give it a 10 thumbs up. lol
ami_girl

18/Female
Kansas City, MO
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Posted On: September 9, 2006
very very good!!!!
thorn_angel

23/Female
Canada
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Posted On: September 6, 2006
that was really good and u should keep on writing

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