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Hi, my name is Ameria
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The Darkest Twilight (1)

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By hillnina Send DollMailSend EmailYIM
Created: 2007-06-17 19:51:38 All stories by hillnina
PLOT: My new story is about a girl (Ameria) whose destiny is to save her world from The Dark Lord.

Charecters

Ameria -The Light Goddess, strong willed 18 years old who sets out to save her world from evil forces

Kashema-The Dislin: Magical creature out to help Ameria

Tye-Warlock: Ex Dark Night is confused about whether or not he's good or evil

The Dark Prince -The Dark Lords son a spitting image of his father, is in love with Ameria

Prince Alcroft -also in love with Ameria helps her defeat the lord hates Tye

King-nice foolish wandering eye

The dark lord- evil twin brother bent on taking over Utica because of a folly many years ago: in love with Galina

Galina-Ameria’s mom raving beauty Lords ex lover

Ilea-lords wife

Kari-Ameria’s sister

Delania - Ameria’s sister

Si-Kari’s son

1

Would you like to dance "Asked the attractive blonde boy, The Prince.

Ameria studied him for a moment, he certainly was handsome enough but dancing with him might give her mother the wrong idea .Her mother was obsessed with finding her a husband .Recently she had given up thoughts of her youngest daughter marrying. Not that Ameria couldn't marry .Any man in Utica would die to marry her but she didn't want to .Her heart had been broken not to long ago, and wasn't looking for more pain. But who was she to refuse the Prince.

"Of course “She replied much too sweetly.

He led her out to the dance floor.

"Have you ever been to a Twilight Ball’ He asked.

Ameria was highly uncomfortable under the princes stare but she still smiled and replied "About 5”

He looked puzzled’ Why haven't I ever seen you?" He pulled her across the room gracefully.

"I was a child .A girl at that. I wouldn't have been introduced to you"

She didn't want to say the truth .She didn't want to say that although her family had been better off than most, she wasn't rich enough to meet the Prince.

''I must have noticed your beauty though’ He grinned

She blushed.”Oh, as I pointed out we were just children you mightn't have noticed"

He smiled a mile a minute."Nonsense, I’ve always been looking out for lovely ladies such as your self”

Ameria couldn't look at him .Her gaze wandered around the extravagant ball room noticing that most people were looking at her and The Prince. She blushed even more.

A great bell rang, TING TONG TING.

The Prince smiled mischievously "Ah, the bells, it's time for the Twilight .Have you ever seen the Twilight from the palace?"

Ameria shook her head no.

"Then you’re in for a treat especially this particular year “He stated "Come you may sit in my box with the royalty today."

She was flabbergasted.’ I simply couldn’t...it...it wouldn't be proper .And furthermore..."

"Shush "He put his finger to her lips "You’re as beautiful and polite as the king himself, if anyone belongs there you do. Besides you have no choice I command you”

More blushing .Oh I do believe I like him very much, she was thinking.

"Why do you blush so much? I’ve never seen such red cheeks. Do I embarrass you?”He questioned as they walked up to the kings viewing box, passing lovely adorned hallways.

She smiled for real this time "To be honest I’m not used to such praise from a ...well a Prince .Its all too flattering and I do not deserve it .I may have a bit of money but my family isn't so productive that a Prince such as your self would ask me to dance much less call me beautiful .I am a bit embarrassed at your attentions."She said honestly, her green eyes searching his blue ones. Her black lace dress ruffled as she stepped into the veranda to view the Twilight sky.

He looked at her then let out such a great laugh that everyone turned to look at them .One of them being Ameria’s mother.

"Why wouldn't I ask you to dance or call you beautiful? I like to dance but I love to dance with a beautiful woman. No need for this embarrassment, rejoice for you have caught my eye to where I’ve neglected my other guests to the point of being rude.”He answered. She was all smiles.

"What did you mean that I was in for a treat?"She inquired

He smiled, almost evilly, “You’ll see"

And goodness did she.

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Member Comments  
Jade_Rose

104/Female
Russia
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Posted On: June 17, 2007
Wow. This was great. I really do LOVE it.

-Jade
Water_Demon

20/Female
Orlando, FL
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Posted On: June 17, 2007
^_^ SO Awesome!!

Please keep me posted!
hillnina

18/Female
Pensacola, FL
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Posted On: June 17, 2007
thats what i thought
Truth_BTold

105/Female
Yemen
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Posted On: June 17, 2007
.............just out of curiousity why do care of my opinion?
silentlyscream

19/Male
Bemiss, GA
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Posted On: June 17, 2007
Why are your stories ignored? That was great. And you actual thought yours out. I never do that. You have to keep writing.
X_EnvyMe_X

104/Female
Nanticoke, PA
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Posted On: June 17, 2007
awesome.keep me posted.lol as Luvable would say Fantastico..
unadorned_rose

19/Female
Chicago, IL
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Posted On: June 16, 2007
Nice. I like it! Thanx for the DM. Keep me posted.
LyingNaked

18/Female
Australia
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Posted On: June 16, 2007
Awesome!

**Peggie**
Evil_vidia

17/Female
Chattanooga, TN
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Posted On: June 16, 2007
i like it keep going
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