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Hi, my name is Carrot
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 | Tell Me When[[Short Story]] |
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 5 with 2 vote(s)
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| Created: 2008-12-22 23:14:44 |
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A/N: Sorry if this doesn't make that much sense.
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Do you mind telling me when the world started crashing down? I don't remember it happening at all but I will allow you this--a lot of things have been slipping past me unnoticed. Are my senses failing? Have I been doing something wrong again? Why am I standing here alone in the middle of a crowd, but not really seeing anyone at all? Can somebody please tell me, where I'm supposed to go now?
I look around, trying to find someone I recognize. In a way everyone looks the same. Yet when I try to get a closer look they all look the same. I'm trying to scream for help, but my voice is lost. Where did it go? Can I find it? I try to yell again, but all I can get out is air. Why can't I get someones attention?
I try to make my legs move, to make myself go forward. I can't find the strength within me to push myself.
I'm scrambling around inside my head, trying to pull myself out of this darkness. Where did my ledge of support and comfort go? Where did everything I once hold near go? Why can't I see? Why can't I scream? Where is everyone and why am I here, of all places for my mind to send me?
I can hear someone in the distance. They are very far away. They are screaming my name but I can't get myself to call back. At first I wanted to leave but I like this new world.
There's a bright flash of light and then every one's gone. I'm standing in the darkness. Is this my mind? I move my feet, and I fall flat on the ground. Something cuts my hands and a giant dark wave of salt water crashes down upon me. I go under the current; my legs and arms trying to fight the strong waves. My head breaks the surface and I gasp for air. I reach my hands out in front of me and try to find something-anything-to grab a hold of. I'm not going to let myself die-how could I?
My hands slip and slide over the sharp salt covered rock. My hands are bleeding freely but I can't see the blood. The wave crashes into my back, sending me head first into the rock I was so desperately trying to climb a few seconds before. I feel it cut my head as my legs kick helplessly under me. The wave releases its hold on me and I fling myself onto the rock; my hands and feet scraping against it.
There's another bright flash of light and my rock is gone. Its very bright now and I'm falling from a hole in the ceiling. Above me is a square, a square that is black. Laughter is coming from the square. Those are the laughs of my family and friends. I'm surprised that I don't care that they are laughing. I'm surprised that it doesn't hurt me at all.
I turn over in mid air and let out a shrill scream. I'm about to crash into hard cutting glass.
My body hits the glass below me. I scream in agony as my red blood drips across the clear white surface. I scream louder as I see it's a mirror. Some one's walking towards me, from behind. I can see their reflection. Somewhere near by I can hear a heart monitor picking up pace as my heart breaks out into a sprint. I can hear someone crying but I've lost my voice and movement again. I can't force myself to do anything. I'm paralyzed from fear.
The person swings down an axe and I squeeze my eyes tight.
Can someone tell me when I went insane? The beginning, middle or end? |
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