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Hi, my name is Carrot Lee
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Take It In

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By CaRrOt Send DollMail
Created: 2008-08-22 15:50:54 All stories by CaRrOt
Time doesn't stop,

for the will of others.

It's the last good bye,

take it in.

It's speeding up,

hours fly by as minutes.

It's the last good bye,

can you take it in?

He's coming closer,

you saw this coming.

You don't push away,

you stay close by.

You want it to last,

but the seconds just past.

Time doesn't slow down,

for a single soul,

take it in.

It's ended,

it's over,

you've taken it in.

He's backing away,

but begging for more.

You find yourself moving,

after the retreating boy,

can you let him go away?

Take it in,

it's the last chace.

Take it in,

time doesn't bend.
  

Member Comments  
Biscut21

17/Female
Justin, TX
All My Stories
Posted On: March 1, 2009
I loved it!

Luvellz

Robby--
xXLucyXx

15/Female
Snell, VA
All My Stories
Posted On: September 1, 2008
So good CaRrot as always.



--Lucy--
One_Universe

18/Male
United Kingdom
All My Stories
Posted On: August 23, 2008
Tis a good poem. Thanks for sharing your very valuable opinion on my "writing a song" post.

Danke

Des xxx
Blackened_Suns

16/Female
United Kingdom
All My Stories
Posted On: August 22, 2008
awesome poem!
CaRrOt

17/Female
Abraham, WV
All My Stories
Posted On: August 22, 2008
Lolz. Thanks! It was pretty last second itself. I didn't even bother to do spell check on it....

Rawr,

[[=Carrot Lee=]]
Idiot_Freak_Ki

18/Female
United Kingdom
All My Stories
Posted On: August 22, 2008
This is good ,I wish I knew what to say but I'm soooo tired and I'm staying up for a little longer just to rate and comment peoples work because...I know I could do it tomorrow but...IDK...it's called an addiction to this website I suppose, and I keep making typing errors aswell....

This is...excellent.

Love

IFK
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