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Hi, my name is Leana
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Stories of Orange Valley(9)

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By Lola_bendfield Send DollMail
Created: 2009-02-02 10:45:45 All stories by Lola_bendfield
"Hey..um glad you came."Max said as i walked in his house for the "important thing" he wanted me over for.

"duh...im your girlfriend."I said.

He smiled and said"Not anymore,"I got nervouse and my eyes got watery.

"No im not breaking up with you,"He said he got on one knee and asked,"Will you marry me?"I almost cried well I did.The ring was so beatiful and he looked so cute.His smile turned into a frown when he saw i didnt respond yet.

"Yes!"I blurted happily.He jumped up and started kissing me.I pushed him on the bed and kissed him.Then....his mom comes in.We froze.

"Am I disrupting something..."SHe asked.

"Um..kinda."He said.

"Sorry,"she said backing up and closing the door.I looked at Max and he looked at me.We burst out laughing his mom always has been cool.

"Look you cant tell your parents."He said suddenly.

"Okay,"I agreed.

"You're mom know?"I asked.

"You know it she agreed she wouldnt say anything."He said.

"So it's going to be a small wedding?"I asked.

"Yeah."Max replied.

I nodded and stood up."You've gotten fat."He joked.

"Well Max jr. or Carmela is worth being a fat a$$."I replied

We laughed."I have to go babe but Ill see you in the window or,,maybe when im getting.......out of the shower,"I joked.

"ooooo."He said as i left the room.His mom smiled at me as I exited the house

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aNgelikegirl

21/Female
Virgin Islands (British)
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Posted On: April 2, 2009
I read this series before and noticed that i didn't Rate most of the chapers so i went threw and gave them all a five
Super_Gal_2852

56/Female
Germany
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Posted On: February 9, 2009
l0l..... marrige is awesome! not that I'm married! that would be scary. o.O
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