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Stories of Orange Valley(4)

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By Lola_bendfield Send DollMail
Created: 2008-12-22 18:15:40 All stories by Lola_bendfield
The door bell rang.I walked slowley towards it and opend it. "hey um I'm here at 6 0 you ready?" Max said."yup" I said walking out the door. Max was looking handsome i was almost weezing his dark shaggy hair was covering his eyes in a cute way and he was in a black and white tux." you look so beautiful." Max said as we got in the car.We pulled up to the most expensive restaurant in Orange Valley "La esta corsp".Max got discount because his aunt worked there.He held my hand as I raised out of the car."Le esta corsp" was beautiful outside and in.Max and I spended the whole date eating and making googly eyes at each other the biggest one was "i love you,No i love you more.".Max and I got back in the car and started uncontrolably kissing each other.Soon we were having "it"."wow." I said catching my breath." wow you're way better than claire." he said laughing." player." I taunted laughing." I guess i should take you home." Max said turning red." You know i'm so glad i experinced s- I meen thanks for offering to take me home." I said.The next day i kept smiling." Uh-OH the good girl went bad last night i presume." Kate said."how would you know?" I asked. you didn't answer your phone and i know because i kept smiling the day after Nirinda and I you know-.""STEP AWAY FROM THE BISH!" Claire screamed." I know what you did you -"" DONT GO THEREI SWEAR I WILL WOOP UR A$$ IM SICK AND TIERD OF YOU!"I said.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- --------Uh-Oh
  

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Super_Gal_2852

56/Female
Germany
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Posted On: December 24, 2008
l0l... i feelz stupid! u told me the 4th 1 was out and I went to read it.... but i already read it! l0l
Super_Gal_2852

56/Female
Germany
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Posted On: December 23, 2008
it was good, a little fast though. AND START NEW PARAGRAPHS! pleeeeaaaaase! I'm beeeeeeeggin uuu!

it was good though!
aNgelikegirl

21/Female
Virgin Islands (British)
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Posted On: December 22, 2008
I liek this series can you read mine and tell me what ou think of it envy is the name
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