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Stories of Orange Valley(3)

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By Lola_bendfield Send DollMail
Created: 2008-12-22 17:36:52 All stories by Lola_bendfield
Max looked at me then he opend his mouth then closed it than looked at me again, smiled then he kissed me and said " I thought you'd never ask.". " I looked at him and he looked back at me." what about Claire?"I said worried." who's Claire." he said as he watched me at the door. EH!EH!EH! morning already? soon I was dressed and ready."good morning Amanda" I said picking up the apple she gave me for "breakfast". I picked up my stuff and went out the door eager to see Max. To my surprise (not really) Claire was gaurding the door to the bus. " May I get by?" I asked pushing her alittle.Then suddenly my face started burning she had slapped me. My face got red this time I.WAS.MAD. I punched her in the stomach and when she fell to the ground I walked over her. " thank you." I said smirking." Hey babe." Max said kissing me.I saw everybody's mouth drop including Claire." I thought I was your girlfriend." Claire said." Your a thing of the past." I said."Burn baby Burn." said Kate smiling.Claire huffed and turned away." Wanna go on a date to-""Yes,Yes a million time YES!" i squield."I'll pick you up at-" " 6 0"I said remembering what he used to say when we were dating before.He nodded and sat down I sat down right on his lap.OH life with a boyfriend is so great.

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Super_Gal_2852

56/Female
Germany
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Posted On: December 23, 2008
CUTE! But remember.... start a new para when a different person starts talking. It's SO much easier to read that way!
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