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Hi, my name is Leana
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| Created: 2009-07-28 17:06:33 |
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Everything is perfect.
The baby shower is beautiful and yesterday me and max moved into our own apartment.
"Gift TIME!"my moth-in-law yelled hitting a glass."All the present were given to use we have everything we need.
"Excuse me everybody.." i yelled
"Before we wrapp up i need Kate up here.."I said.
she came up "Kate your a real friend and your gonna be a real god-mom...if you want"I said
"Of couse yeah..yeah! i would love to be the god-mom of Carmela!"She said giving me a hug.
Everyone sat and talked all day and all night we finally went home at 12 a.m
Me and max were the last ones to leave.
"babe,"Max said.
"Yeah"I said.
"I love you..."he said.
"I love you too.."I said kissing him.
We went back home.
I went in out room and cut the light on and claire was on the bed...Nak.ed.I screamed Max came rushing.
"Claire.."He yelled.
"You love me and you know it!!!Dropp her!"She screamed she took out a steak knife.
"Either you break up with her or i kill her" Claire said.
I started to cry."claire"...He yelled.
i snuck and called the police and told them out situation.
Max was yelling.I ran in there and Claire started chocking me..
I. scquirmed ans squirmed
Max tried to get me out but he couldnt. i heard the police they bust open the door and held claire at gun point.
"PUT THE GIRL DOWN!" a cop belowed.
she turned me loose and i fell on my back max rushed to me and whisperd in my ear that everything would be okay.I stared at claire while Max stroked my hair. Claire flipped the knife and pointed it to her.AND then she stabbed herself in the heart.
I screamed and started to cry. "O my god"Max yelled.
the ambulance came and pronounced Claire dead. That only made me scream and cry more.Max called his mom and my dad.
My dad tried to comfort me but it made me cry more.Hismom was kissing me on the forhead and comforted Max and she decided she should stay of and comfot me.
she changed my sheats and everything.
A great day gone wrong......even if i hated claire i was sad to see her go she has always be part of my heart...since we were little |
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even though i cant stand her!