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Hi, my name is Leana
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Stories of Orange Valley (1)

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By Lola_bendfield Send DollMail
Created: 2008-12-22 12:13:00 All stories by Lola_bendfield
" Leana! your not going to school looking like a slu-" " your not my mother AMANDA!" I said rolling my eyes at my step mother who wasn't wearing anything but a robe. "well your father married me so that makes me your mother smarty." amanda said."bye." I said walking out the door so i could catch the bus before it pulled off. " Hey Peena." Claire ( the mean girl of the school of Orange Valley) said. I frowned and walked to the back of the bus. A unfimiliar girl with green hair came and sat next to me. " Hey, " she said extending her hand.I shook her hand and smiled." You must be new, " I said putting a stand of my hair behind my ear. " How would you know? " she asked. " I haven't seen you around."I said. " Well,here is some facts about me my name is Kate I'm from Brooklin I used to live there Um, if your wondering my hair isn't natuarly green and lastley i'm-" Just then a girl ran up to her and kissed her on the lips. " G.a.y." she said breathlessly." This is my girlfriend Nirinda." Kate said smiling. The bus sputtered as it stopped right in front of Orange Valley. " Well um time for class," I said smiling at her easing myself out of the bus. As I walked throught the door I saw Claires boyfriend, Alex,. As i was gazing at Alex kate ran up to me. " we're having a pool party today wanna come." Kate said holding Nirinda's hand." I'll be there." I said smiling. The warning bell rang." gotta Go! " I panicked runing down the hall.

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StrawberryRose

95/Female
United States Minor Outlying Islands
All My Stories
Posted On: January 20, 2009
Wow...
Super_Gal_2852

54/Female
Germany
All My Stories
Posted On: December 22, 2008
ha ha ha... I gots me a hottie b.f named Alex! l0l
Super_Gal_2852

54/Female
Germany
All My Stories
Posted On: December 22, 2008
that was good! But here's a quick tip, When a different person starts talking, start a new para. Like so...

"I'm going out to the Creek!" Cara called as she shut the door behind her.

"Don't fall in!" Her little brother Jera taunted heartily.

Just a thought! oh... and ya know what's really ironic? My names Claire! l0l
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