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Hi, my name is Holly
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Slipped Away

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Created: 2005-03-27 15:29:15 All stories by
Holly ran to the mailbox and opened the little door.

" Max's mail, Mom's, Mom's, Max's, bill for mom", she mumbled.

Holly lived with her mom and her older brother, Max. Her dad ran away to a different country when Holly was only 3 , so she had very vauge memories of him.

" Why don't I ever get any mail?" Holly mumbled again. The she reached into the back of the box and felt. . .a letter!

" Finally!" she said

She ran inside and gave the bills and the letter to her mom and the letter to Max. Max opened it and exclaimed,

" Hey look, I got accepted into football camp, YES!!!!!", he screamed. Holly rolled her eyes.

"Boys and football, what is with them?", she thought. Then she ripped open her letter.

" OH MY GOSH!! I just got invited to Claire's birthday bash!", she squealed. Claire was the most popular girl in school, and she could not miss this!

" Your turn to give some more exciting news Mom.", Max joked.

Her mom opened the letter and her eyes went wide.

" Oh no!", she whispered

" What!!!!", Haolly and Max instanly said.

Their mom looked at them with wide eyes.

" Your grandfather asked us to visit him during your football camp, your party, and my banquet dinner."

***

Holly's grandfather always seemed grumpy. Holly did not want to vist him, but she had no choise.

At dinner, their mom took Holly, Max and Grampa out to an expensive Italian restaurant. Holly's mouth wated just to see the delicasies( sorry if i speled that wrong) on the menu.

When it was her grandfather turn to order he said gruffly,

" You got any pancakes?"

The waiter answered cheerily " No sir, but the special tonight is. . ."

Granpa stormed out before he could answer.

" What kinda place is this? Don't got no pancakes." he said.

***

Later that night Holly talked to Max before they went to bed.

" Grandpa ruins everything! You're supposed to be at football camp and I HAVE to go to Claire's party! This is soo not fair! We have to get rid of Grandpa somwhow!

Then Max said quietly " Sis, Mom is letting me go to football camp. She says if you stay here Granpa won't be lonely." he tried to smile weakly.

Holly just looked at him.

" I wish Grandpa would die!" she screamed!

***

There will be 2 parts to this story. Please rate high 4 part 2 because I worked really hard on this and if you don't like it, I won't continue it.

  

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bettyboop_6

20/Female
Penbrook, PA
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Posted On: March 27, 2005
i think you should keep going. i really like it. But she really shouldn't wish for her grandpa to die
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