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Hi, my name is Carrie
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Revenge of Carrie

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By Sarin Send DollMailVisit Website
Created: 2006-06-28 03:13:17 All stories by Sarin
You broke my heart,

you killed my soul.

You hurt me so bad,

Now your face has a hole.

I used to be happy,

you made me glad.

But ever since I saw you,

you made me mad.

I was so furious,

it was all because of you!

Well, look at you now,

look what you made me do!

You were seeing her at your place,

she left your house that night.

A little while after,

I went into your house at midnight.

I barged right through the door,

you yelled " hey, what are you doing?!"

I raised my arm up,

that's when I started shooting.

You ran through the hallway,

you ran into your room.

I finally caught you,

And then you last heard....BOOM!

I put down the gun,

you were lying on your bed.

I walked up to your body,

I shot you in the head.

I sometimes feel sorry,

I sometimes feel regret.

But this is one memory,

I will not forget.
  

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pinay_partier

24/Female
Orlando, FL
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Posted On: June 8, 2007
mwa ha ha aha ha ha aha ha ah ahahah haha hah ah ha
pinay_partier

24/Female
Orlando, FL
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Posted On: June 8, 2007
i might of freeked out my bf when i said this but i said if you cheated on me then i wud come to ur house at 12 am and stab u 10 million times.. lol
KJ10

18/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: June 2, 2007
Oooo~~~ Bet that hurt, SUCKER! mwu ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ah ah aha ha ah aha ha ha aha! Soz, I'm a mad person.
wolfie_pink

23/Female
Chicago, IL
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Posted On: September 17, 2006
AWESOME POEM GURL! THAT WAS THE BEST THANG I EVER READ TODAY! now if I could only write something like that....
lovergirl2

23/Female
Corpus Christi, TX
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Posted On: June 28, 2006
that was intense but awesome read my poem called SOUL TO KEEP
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