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Hi, my name is Carly
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Remember The Red Roses

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Story Rating   4.63  with 8 vote(s)
By total_cheer_girl7 Send DollMail
Created: 2008-07-12 21:39:50 All stories by total_cheer_girl7
Remember that day,

When you walked through my door,

Holding red roses,

You eyes to the floor.

I saw you smile slyly,

Giving me a look,

I asked why the flowers,

And your head shook.

Remember that day,

When you tried to cook,

Ending with mush,

I gave you that look.

Your spatula fell from your hand,

Laughter spilled out,

Meatballs lie on my floor,

They made me pout

Remember when we kissed,

So softly at first,

Then the heat came,

As is from a burst.

Your fingers knotted,

Grabbing my hair,

You took me away,

It felt like floating on air.

Remember the fun,

Forget our fight,

The darkness is over,

Look into the light.

Even though you're gone,

Your spirit is here,

Etched in my memory,

I can see you so clear.
  

Member Comments  
CaRrOt

19/Female
Abraham, WV
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Posted On: July 13, 2008
Fantastic! I really like that!

CaRrOt
MermaidGem76

15/Female
Union, KY
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Posted On: July 13, 2008
Wowsers!That was splendid!
designing_till

14/Female
Riverview, FL
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Posted On: July 13, 2008
I did it again! *Spell* check!
designing_till

14/Female
Riverview, FL
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Posted On: July 13, 2008
Sorry I am like speel check I meant to say *SIMPLY* Beautiful
designing_till

14/Female
Riverview, FL
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Posted On: July 13, 2008
That was Bsimply beautiful

So deep, and understanding

I could relate to it
girlteen

17/Female

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Posted On: July 13, 2008
That was really good.
sing_with_me

103/Female
Snell, VA
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Posted On: July 12, 2008
really good!
PuppiLuv

17/Female
Virgin Islands (US)
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Posted On: July 12, 2008
it was ok...
Tinker_Bell27

94/Female
Australia
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Posted On: July 12, 2008
Aww.

Thats so sad.

But so good! It was really, really good.

xxIzzyxx
a_tear_on_a_ro

17/Female
Portland, OR
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Posted On: July 12, 2008
Wow, that was... well quite amazing. I loved it!
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