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Raining Streets

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Story Rating   4.72  with 18 vote(s)
By pinkshine05 Send DollMail
Created: 2008-12-14 20:22:39 All stories by pinkshine05
A/N: I hope you like it. ^.^

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Little rain drops,

Forming silent falls

Splashing to the beat,

Of the vigorous calls

Empty, narrow streets,

Covered with rain

Trees blowing to the wind,

Like dancing canes

Standing in the center,

Feeling drops tap your skin

Starting from your head and down to your chin,

Cascades of liquid,

Splatter across town

On top of the roofs,

And all the way down

The town’s the head and the rain’s the crown

Rain, always covers up the town

Little rain drops,

Forming silent falls

Splashing to the beat,

Of the vigorous calls

Droplets of water feel so eased,

Just let it surge, and make you pleased

From the sky it falls,

And down to the lane it meets

Raining streets

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A/N: I just felt like writing something that I wouldn't have to continue, since I have a bunch of series left, so a poem would just do. I got the idea from yesterday, it started raining like hell, it was a around 12-ish in the morning, it was like pitch black. =]

Comment and rate. ^^
  

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Minti

19/Female
Australia
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Posted On: October 22, 2008
its great

Sharmy06

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: October 18, 2008
Love it!! It was so thoutful and truthful
buddy_luvs_me

18/Female
Forks, WA
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Posted On: August 23, 2008
Aww. That makes me miss the rain. I love it. :]
breanah_brutal

16/Female
Fort Worth, TX
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Posted On: August 14, 2008
loved it....

wen i was reading it i was kinda wondering what made you right about rain....

but i guess i figured it out

it would be better if it had a shiny thing at the very end but i loved it......

heres a cookie for A good poem

*gives cookie*

hope you like it its my favorite kind....chocolate chip!!!!(sorry i'm all out of sugar cookies)

~BlairBugg~
pinkshine05

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: August 13, 2008
-Huggles comments-

Thanksies, guys. I didn't expect this many comments, for a poem, that only took me two minutes...

Definite happiness. ^^

Love, Strawberries && Bananas

-((CrAzY))-
cute71

20/Female
Canada
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Posted On: August 13, 2008
That was one heck of a poem

You are amazing, especially your writing skills. ^^

x3 -----Cute------ x3
SILLYx_LoveSon

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
Wow. That was really good.

See, I wish I could write poetry. I'm glad you sent me the link.

You definitely have a way with words. =]
t_wilight

16/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
Wow, that was so...beautiful.

*tear falls down cheek*

Hey! Maybe I can make my own rain!

o________o

Okay, that was weird, ignore that sentence, if you can.

Loved it!

.::..::jen::..::.
hpfan2443

16/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
awesome!!

great!

tw'awesome!

um........great! oh wait, i already said that.

anywho...loved it!
Horrors

105/Male
Broken Arrow, OK
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
Awesome. My poetic SK1LLZZZZ are bleak and morbid. I don't think I know how to write anything like this. O_O And it woudldn't be as good, anyway.

Thanks for sending me a link. ^^

‡ Horrors
pinkshine05

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
Haha. Sure Carrot. Sure. lol

Love, Strawberries && Bananas

-((CrAzY))-
CaRrOt

19/Female
Abraham, WV
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
I love it.

=]

I own the doll.

Rawr,

[[=Carrot Lee=]]
designing_till

14/Female
Riverview, FL
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
I lubb it.

So cute!!

5*s
brutusdog

21/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

I feel inferior

I try writing pretty things, and they end up being devoured by the beast that is wrath *sob* XP

Anyway I LOVED IT ^^

Brutie
MermaidGem76

15/Female
Union, KY
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
Luff it!
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