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Hi, my name is GUSTAVO
MONTANA
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 | REVENGE UPON THE CULLENS PART 2n3 (CULLENS EMEMIE) |
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| Created: 2009-07-03 13:59:24 |
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Victoria and I only made it half way to Forks when she complained she was hungry. We'd just had 2 homeless women's limp bodies in our hands and feasted upon their blood and only 15 minutes later she was hungry again. I'd notice when we took off that she wasn't very fast like most vampires. Her speed was irrelavant not the speed really just about 30 MPM. "Your weak you wouldn't last one day if you were a human," I said. she eyed me curiously as if deep down she knew I was right. " Well so be it, but your brother he didn't last now did he?" she asked. My anger rised and before I knew it my pale hands were around her neck. " You casted-out-demon with one twist of my arm i could have you lying down in the dust were you belong. Don't you ever while i'm alive talk about my brother the way you just did," I said almost in a faint yell. I let her go and she fell slightly. Her voice faded and she got back on her feet. I turned my face away so she wouldn't see that I regetted it.
" What do we do now.I must eat before we continue," she said that look she had came back on her face. I turned to her all of my despair put to the side. We sat amoung the trees, the sun began to sink into the meadow, and both of us hist along with the birds. " I sense the smell of beer so there has to be a bar near by," I said. Her nose twiched and I could see she smelled it. " Yes it is i've come across this bar before many time in the pass with James and Laurent," she said. The sound of my brother's name sent a shiver down my back and I leaped down from the tree. " We'll head that way then back on the trail to Forks," I said. She nodded her head and in seconds we both took off towards the rotten smell.
The Bar:
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Victoria entered first and at that moment all eyes turned. She stole the whole bars attention even some of the women turned to look at her. ' Hey baby come sit with daddy," one said. Another shouted " Look at that back baby knows she got it,". Victoria ignored making no contact only sensing whom she wanted. She went to the bar. " I'll have a Bud light no ice," she said. The bartender nodded his head and immediately took the order. Victoria continued to look around. None seemed good enough she felt she'd just have to settle. " Your here all by yourself sweety," someone asked. She turned to see a handsome man, probably late 20s, lightly blackish brown hair, blue eyes, and creamy skin. BINGO she thought. His scent lingered in the air and Victoria inside went nuts. " Who are you?" she asked trying to be normal as possible. He smiled. " I'm O'Conner Riley whom might you be?" he asked. She smiled.
" I'm Vicky Waters," she lied. He smiled once more. " Well hello Vicky nice to meet you," he said. He extended his hand and she took it. As soon as he felt the coldness O'Conner jerked back. " Wow girly your hands are freezing," he said. Victoria laughed wickedly. Tell me about it she thought. " Um I left my purse in the car be a doll and help me go out and get it?" she asked. O'Conner smiled. ' Now Vicky we just met. I don't know if I should trust you just yet," he said. " Oh come on don't be like that," she said. O'Conner hesitated. She then leaned over and whispered something in his ear. O'Conner eyes grew big and his smiled returned. " Well I surpose I can help you," he said . Victoria winked her eye and began to make her way to the door. She headed to a car and O'Conner trailed right behind. " That's funny this is my car," he said. Victoria turned around as if she was in shock. " It is?" she asked. Her eyes were now honey brown dark and before O'Conner could even notice Victoria teeth were being sunk into his neck. ' What the-!" he yelled, but nothing more could come out as Victoria drained him clean. O'Conner yells became whispers as he began to see his last minutes in life fade away.
Victoria took his limp body and buried it in the woods close by the bar. Soon I appeared and helped her. " Are you full now?" I asked. She nodded her head and a small smirk came over her face. We both took off and in no time we were in Forks. At last i get to kill I thought. Victoria and I jumped in this huge tree and she lead me to this home. The house was made mostly of glass and had a nice build, but you could tell it was pretty old. " So I guess they lke to hide from the rest of the world?" I asked. Victoria nodded and I smiled. " Well not really the teenagers they attended school and the man he's a doctor," she said. " What's his name?" I asked. She then replied Carlisle. " Fancy name I like, to bad he'll never get to share it anymore," I said determined. Victoria smiled so did I.
"Were do we start," she asked.
"With the stongest,".
" Well then it's Emmett," she said.
" Ok then you have your answer, we'll start with him," I said
We both jumped to another tree as I asked her to take me to the human. With out any hesitation she told me to follow her. The trees flew past us jump from jump and then I sensed it we were being followed. We both continued until I heared a grunt on one jump I turned and there was another whom lept on me. I feel hard onto the leafy ground. This person a girl. I looked up at her in amazement. She had brownish hair cut just above her shoulder blades if I could se corectly i'd say with little highlights, her eyes a dark honey brown yet a little dark brown, she wore a light yellow sweater and a dark black many skirt. " Alice," I said. She looked at me in shock. " Who are you and why are you here to kill us?" she asked. I couldn't speak I was still in shock once more I said her name. She just looked at me. At that time Victoria appeared at her side. Before I could even stop her Victoria had a huge stick and swung it with all her stength at Alice who also fell onto the ground.......
part 3
" No!" I yelled, but it was to late. There as I layed on the ground looking at Alice who layed unconsiously by me. " I thought you wanted me too," said Victoria. I looked at her and then she knew I was angry. I jumped to my feet and neiled by Alice. " Are you ok?" I asked. No reply, I looked up at Victoria and she scowled. " Gustavo you can't be serious. She's a part of the family that killed your brother and all you can ask her is is she ok," Victoria said. She pasted back and forward. Once more I asked Alice was she ok, still no reply. Then both Victoria and I heard dogs barking and people close by. " We better go before we're turned into doggy lunch meat," Victoria joked. She laughed I didn't and that let her know I was still angry. I looked Alice over once more and then Victoria and I sped off. Before we were far enough I turned to see that Alice was gone. "Take me still to the human," I said. Once again Victoria nodded and lead the way.
Bella's house:
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The humans house was old abit rusty even through it was made out of wood. The pavement was alot dirty and a huge huge truck sat in the driveway. " This is it?" I asked. She nodded, I could tell she was still on the Alice thing and I didn't like her reaction towards Alice. " Well is she there?" I asked. Victorai sniffed the air and without no reply she jumped down from the tree and disappeared, seconds later she was back. " She's in there, but so is the boy and he knows i'm here he sensed me ," she said. I frowned and soon the door to the girls home opened ad there stood a hansome young man. A girl just as pale as me ran behind him. He pushed her back into the doorway. He continued to look around and whispered something in the girl's ear and she showed a huge sign of fear. " He's looking for us," said Victoria. No duh genius I thought, but no time for insecurity. " We should kill him first instead of Emmett. I want to see thr girl suffer," Victoria said breaking the silence. I considered the idea, but I wasn't cruel like that. " No we'll just let it fall in place," I said. She rolled her eyes and nodded. The girl and boy went back into the home. " Why are you always ordering things for people to do?" Victorioa asked. I tryed to ignore her and jumped down from the tree.
Before I could hit the ground correctly Victoria was at my side. "Do you always have to be in control of everything? Now I see where James gets it from," she said. I then got angry again. " Godda*n you Victoria I've told you to leave my brother's name out of your mouth," I said. She smiled and I knew she was thinking something. " Your both alike," she started turning to me. " You both are controling, you both want everything to go your way, to go according to your plans, and everything you do has to be perfect,". I eyed her and she didn't back down from eyeing me the same way. " Victoria i'm sorry if you feel that way, but I feel pain for what the've done to my brother and I_,"
" WHAT AND YOU THINK I DON'T!" she yelled.
My eyes grew wide and once again blackness took over them.
" Calm your voice before they hear us," I said more of a whisper.
She closed her eyes and tears were trying to be held back. " Your a moron Gustavo and I hope they kill you. I hope you end up like your brother," she said. I couldn't stop her because she was already gone and I was left alone in the woods of this cold place which it started to rain in. Once again my voice was a whisper and I could only look in the path she took. My blowing hair waved with the wind as if it wanted to also blow by. I'll reunite with you later I thought right now I have unfinish business. I then turned to see the handsome young man that stood in the doorway of the humans home.
We both made eye contact.
"Hello you must be Edwin," I said.
He hist. " It's Edward," he replied.
" Well hello Edward i'm Gustavo," I said
We both stared each other down.
His eyes turned a honey golden brown, mines turned pitch black.
" Is there a problem here?" he asked.
I laughed coldly
" Actually there is," I said.
Before he could reply I had already leaped at him and we both tobbled to the ground.....
Oh my gosh i'm having so much fun writing this story and i have so much surprise
I love that I have you guys support in writing this
I DON'T OWN ANY OF THESE NAMES EXC EPT GUSTAVO MONTANA
THANKS
Christina B A.K.A Dylan C |
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