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REVENGE UPON THE CULLENS PART 1 (CULLENS ENEMIE)

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By Christinaa Send DollMailSend EmailYIM
Created: 2009-06-29 18:44:27 All stories by Christinaa
What if I told you that I thristed for a human's blood?

What if I told you that I was faster than the speed of light?

What if I told you that my stength could measure up to an angels?

What if I told you that I was indeed on a killing strike?

What if I told you that I wanted both Bella and Edward's head on a platter to be hung upon my wall to show that both were dead just as they had done to my brother James?

What If?

My names Gustavo Montana and I want The Cullens killed whom as this moment don't belong on this earth. Both the whole cullens family and Bella who ever that human is don't belong here after what they did to my brother James Montana. I feel you are shocked because you feel that how horrible James was that he doesn't deserve to have family and no one should care for him. Well newflash he does and I do

Everytime I say that ingrateful human name I want my insides to become dust and fall apart. Bella is it. Well Bella you've just made it hard on yourslef and this time Edwin or Edward whomever he is won't be able to save you this time. Oh and if he is I will mark my words I will kill him and have both of you dead before your life can even flash before your eyes......

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My location was The Appalachian Mountains when I heard of my brothers death. Both Victoria nad Laurent came from a place called Forks, Washington to tell me as I was feasting on a rare humans blood. My eye's turned pitch black, my hands skin became paler than ever, my voice was lost with the wind, and my terrifying stage became more horribly defying. " You can't possibly believe that he's dead?" I asked. Laurent said he sensed it Victoria said she saw it. my rage became more dominant. "If you seen it why didn't you help James?" I asked. Both Laurent and I eyed her as she hesitated. " Before I got to him, they'd alreay had the fire read. There was nothing I could do Gustavo he was already dead," she said. I threw the already dead human body away from us, but Laurent ran to catch it. "Gustavo we could really use this we haven't eaten since we took off to find you from Forks. I shook my hand to give him approval.

"So you were saying they've burned my brother?" I asked. She nodded her head. My temper began to expand ad my whole body became numb. A single tear rolled down my pale face and the salty water hit my lips. Disgusted with the taste I wiped my lips. I turend back to Victoria her redish curled hair blew in the wind. There had to be a reason they killed James thinking this I asked. Victoria ASAPly replied. " There's a human name Bella short for Ishabella Swan. Well she dates the youngest of the family Edward," she said. I sat atop one of the mountains tops. " Do you recall what the family's name is?" I asked. She shook her head, but Laurent jumped right in and said The Cullens. My eyes grew wide. "Name this family for me,I mean name all whoses in this family,?

They both in unison began to call out the names. " Calisle, Esme, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie, Jasper, and Alice," the replied. My eyes bucked and the blackness of them came back again. " You ok"? asked Laurent. My face was back to a pale color. " Say the last name again please," I asked. Both looked at each other and Victoria repeated " Alice," and then it hit me Alice Cullen. The girl who escaped James, the one who ran off and joined this family, the only girl who was the love of my life. " Did you hurt her,? I asked raising off of the mountain. They shooked their heads and I sighed with relief.

My mind whent back to my brother and I picture his body being tore from limp to limp fighting for his life, but in the end being defeated. "Will you show me the way to Forks and to this family," I asked. Laurent hesitated, but Victoria had a smile and replied yes. We then turned to Laurent whom didn't agree just yet. "Well Laurent are you with us or not?" I asked. He shook his head and before I knew it he was thousands of mile away. "Don't worry about him Gustavo he'll be back," said Victoria. She kissed me on the cheek and winked her eye. Your not my type I thought. We both sensed the way and headed off to Forks. Speed wasn't a waste it was help in this situation.

I was ready to kill.

I wanted a head for nothing.

For they were going to pay even if it meant my life as well................

part 2 come out 2morrow or wednesday i hope u guys like

please comment and rate thanks for your support and once again

i don't own any of these names except Gustavo Montana, but ofcourse you all know that

Christisna B A.K.A Dylan C
  

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Christinaa

23/Female
Lancaster, TX
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Posted On: June 30, 2009
o i really didnt focus on that but yeah lol

Jennabobenna

20/Female
Oakland, OR
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Posted On: June 30, 2009
Correct me if I'm wrong: In Stephenie Meyer's version, vampires can't cry, right?

I suppose if you want them to cry, they can. It's your story, after all. =J
Christinaa

23/Female
Lancaster, TX
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Posted On: June 29, 2009
thanks

twilight_crazy

17/Female
Tahlequah, OK
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Posted On: June 29, 2009
I love twilight.this was pretty good.
Christinaa

23/Female
Lancaster, TX
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Posted On: June 29, 2009
lol ur crazy but i just thought to write something
x_Emma_x

102/Female
Longview, TX
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Posted On: June 29, 2009
I want to kill the Cullen's too. They are sparkling cannibles that aren't even vampires. Real vampires drink HUMAN blood. I wonder how much crap Stephanie ate to barf Twilight out? Hmm... Interesting question.

† Emma
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