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Hi, my name is Debi
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Please Let Me Go 2

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By qazqaz Send DollMail
Created: 2008-07-11 12:42:02 All stories by qazqaz
As I think about my dad

Who left me long ago.

I think about my mom

whos feelings are always low.

I think she's found a way

to make herself feel better

She beats me twice a day

thats all the time we have together

I wish that she still said

what she said when dad

was here "I love you so much,

Oh, your such a dear."

She doesn't give me much to eat

just bits here and there

she keeps the rest to herself

She'll never really care.

Oh, please mom dont beat me

i just want you to know

Oh please mom dont hurt me

I never wanted dad to go.

this happens every day

as I beg and beg not to do it

but she never listens

she just keeps herself more lit.

Someday she'll think to kill me

and never deal with me again

she'll just take a knife and stab me

while saying "Bye Deborah Gwen."
  

Member Comments  
kittenlover1

15/Female
Canada
All My Stories
Posted On: July 11, 2008
omg is that true?

SeasonSweetMod

20/Female
Canada
All My Stories
Posted On: July 11, 2008
Aww, thats so sad and sweet! 5*!

|~|~|Rocky|~|~|
designing_till

12/Female
Riverview, FL
All My Stories
Posted On: July 11, 2008
Oh that's a hell of a lot better than the first,

Loadz of detail.

I could marry you!

Or just it...
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