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Phantoms Update (:

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By pinkshine05 Send DollMail
Created: 2009-07-26 19:41:59 All stories by pinkshine05
Technically, this is in the right section since it's about my Phantom series so yeah. This post is basically just an update for my Phantom fans. Ooh, that felt good to say. Phantom fans. Phantom fans. Phantom fans. OOOH. It's getting to me..PHANTOM FANS. PHANTOM FANS. PHANTOM FANS. I think that's enough. O.o

Anyways...for some weird reason it just really bothers me that 'I think' my chapters aren't long enough to be a novel. Sooo...it might take a WHILE to get out the next few parts. Just a WHILE...

I'M SORRY. T_T

SORRY BRUTIE. I know you wanted it REALLY badly. I feel bad about it but I need it to be the best it can be for YOU GUYS. Whoopie! For one, I know that Kate (Farm) and brutie really like my series. But I need opinions from all of you guys who have read it to tell me if you guys REALLY, HONESYLY like it. If you're not sure I'd really appreciate it if you read the chapters I have out currently and tell me what you TRUTHFULLY think of it. I need to know this because if I'm going to have it published and just waste a bunch of bucks for nothing if you guys really didn't like it, then I'd pretty much feel as dumb as ever. So you guys, PLEASE be honest and tell me what you think of Phantoms.

And for the people who haven't read it and clicked this anyways. Here's a quick summary. If you want you can write your opinion but yeah...

Summary of Phantoms:

Arielle Sanders has had nightmares when she was little about ghosts. At the age of six she stopped having nightmares about them. She was always afraid to go to bed, for she was afraid to close her eyes because she knew she'd have dreams about them.

She never went trick-o-treating at Halloween and never went to school on Halloween either. Her parents didn't think anything was wrong with her for they thought it was okay to experience these things according to her age.

Now she's living as a 16 year old teen in South Gold High. Arielle is slender, with sensitive skin. She has russet coloured hair, which is short and clumpy. Arielle's hair is naturally straight or either wavy. Her eyes, a plain hazel. She is often curious, she get distracted easily and has an average living. She has divorced parents and is living with her mom who works in her own Beauty Salon in her basement. Arielle's father has a job in Korea and she only sees him once a month. She has completely forgotten about how she had those dreams ten years ago, but the memory try to come back into her head. She has a classmate named Seth Barosa who seems to always be following her and acting strangely around her. She finds him annoying as she gets frustrated with him often. However sometimes she wonders what his problem is. People say he's never at his home and doesn't have any parents but she gives no care to his problems.

Soon she discovers what's happening with her and her past...

_______

Thanks, my PHANTOM FANS.

I'm stopping...

xoxo Crazy

PHANTOM FANS.

I lied. =P
  

Member Comments  
Izzy_zy_Rocker

18/Female
Netherlands, The
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Posted On: August 5, 2009
Brutie is always like that, she obsesses over things.

You should just give her what she wants every once in a while, and then stop writing for a really really long time to drive her insane.

It's fun to do, because you're sort of hurting her feelings. XD
rocky095

22/Female
East Highland, CA
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Posted On: August 4, 2009
As long as we can still read it then im ok, i guess

=p

-Stef
t_wilight

16/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: July 30, 2009
*Phantoms /is/ an excellent story.
t_wilight

16/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: July 30, 2009
I agree with all the comments here.

Phantoms was an excellent story, and just the genre I love. (:

And good luck. If you do post it, keep me updated, love.

(:

((Kat))
Blackened_Suns

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: July 28, 2009
Phantoms is amazing.

no lie.

Vanilla&&
Farm

103/Female
Canada
All My Stories
Posted On: July 28, 2009
MORE, MORE!

*sadface*
mikesbab

20/Female
Canada
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Posted On: July 27, 2009
1 word Brilliant

X_xDaniellex_X
xXLush_RoseXx

22/Female
Grangerland, TX
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Posted On: July 27, 2009
Look - it's Santa Claus! An update, just what I always wanted. XD

Hun, Phantoms is great. Honestly, I love it. It's a pure delight that sends a collective shiver down your back and makes you wish you could read just a little bit more. Yes, I'm purely serious. I adore it and would gladly read more or buy it from a rack in a bookstore. So, write on! Don't be shy. We all wanna see it.
brutusdog

21/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: July 27, 2009
Haha

NO!

I hate you *cries*

XD

I can't wait for more though.

Brutie

:]

I hope all goes well.
broken_nightma

103/Female
Braden River, FL
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Posted On: July 27, 2009
Third good luck comment coming up.....

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.. Now

Good luck if you do try to get it published, its a wicked idea for a story, kind of "1990s Nightmare books" with a bit of an "are you afraid of the dark" episode thrown in.

But if for some bizarre reason nothing works out right, Phantoms will always have its fan base here(i'm pretty sure........*glances left and right*............I'd still read it).
eliginorski

19/Female
Canada
All My Stories
Posted On: July 26, 2009
I also really love your Phantom series, and I really do think that you should at least try to get it published at some point.

And good luck from me, as well.
sarahco777

14/Female
Colorado Springs, CO
All My Stories
Posted On: July 26, 2009
I think your Phantoms series is positively genius. Truthfully, I don't lie (well, only when I absolutely need to...). Whatever you decide to do, I am cool with it, though I personally think you should try to eventually get it published and then tell us the title so we can go find it.

But anyways, good luck. I'm currently trying to turn an idea of mine into a novel as well. I am struggling with the length of the first chapter, but I'll get it soon.

Anyway for like the billionth time, good luck and if you do decide to have Phantoms on here, keep me updated.

-Sarah
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