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Hi, my name is Sheeta
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Parasuicide |Poem|

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Story Rating   4.67  with 12 vote(s)
By Sheeta Send DollMailVisit Website
Created: 2009-01-03 14:46:55 All stories by Sheeta
You're watching her through one-way glass

Waiting for her agony to pass

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You're watching with a frown that can't help but linger

A scalpel held between her frail index finger

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You're watching through tear stained eyes

As the blood slithers down between her thighs

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You're watching with a broken heart

As she continues creating her morbid art

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You're watching with fear let loose; untame

As she continues basking herself in pain

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You're watching

Waiting

-x-

She's thinking of you

As she makes her mark

Wondering what you would do

If you saw this deadly art

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She's thinking of you

As she carves deeper

Wondering if your harsh words were true

If you knew the truth would you keep her

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She's thinking of you

As she nears her end

Wondering what you would do

If you saw her following this dark trend

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She's thinking of you

As her heart begins to slow

Wondering if you'll cry those tears that have no hue

If you saw her go

-x-

You're watching from broken one-way glass

As she whispers 'at last'

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You're watching from her side

As her soul begins to glide

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You're watching her lifeless eyes

As she doesn't respond to your cries.
  

Member Comments  
XxX_Exploding_

20/Female
Canada
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Posted On: May 11, 2010
Very impressive. Another fine work with the mind.
NoCtErNaL_RAVE

18/Female
Houston, TX
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Posted On: February 14, 2009
ok good isnt good anymore...ingenious ah thats the word...
tatortot

29/Female
Derby, IA
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Posted On: January 2, 2009
i absalutely loved it! bravo bravo!

~taylor~
pretty_puppie

18/Female
Abilene, TX
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Posted On: January 2, 2009
I love it!!!!!!

It's creepy and suicidal maybe, but real deep.
djvangel_7647

29/Female
Davie, FL
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Posted On: December 27, 2008
BEATIFUL, AWESOME, IM SPEECHLESS

=)
Literature

17/Female
Australia
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Posted On: October 13, 2008
How you do it, I have no idea.

KAREN.
Silly_Star_16

20/Female
Canada
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Posted On: October 12, 2008
Thats incredible. BEEAUUUTIIFULLL

--SillyStar--
ResonantThunde

20/Female
Australia
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Posted On: October 12, 2008
Whoa....

Seriously. LIKE WHOA. =-O

--Thunder--
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