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Hi, my name is Antonia
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POEM - Trigger

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By Ink_Thief Send DollMail
Created: 2008-11-17 14:51:58 All stories by Ink_Thief
A/N: Yeah, I'm not a poet. Don't expect great things from this lol. (:

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I’m begging silently,

For you to kill me.

You have the means,

The bloodied intent

Spilling crimson

Is how I want to be

Your hand wavers,

The gun falling short,

I stare at you,

Imploring, pleading, begging,

Wanting you to do

What I have never been strong enough to

Complete

You whisper my name

You beg me to stop

To stop the temptation,

To stop the begging

To stop the pleading

And the tears

You don’t want to hurt me

Not anymore

But my voice, choked and low,

Is too desirable

To raw with emotion

Emotion you have always sought to destroy.

You hand raises,

And I’m staring down the barrel,

Almost tasting the hot lead,

Imagining the blinding momentary pain

With sickening relish.

I beg you to finish

What I had started with a

Rusted razor blade.

I plead with you to finish me off,

Send me on my overdue journey

Across the river Styx to oblivion.

You gaze at me one last time,

You close your eyes

And you pull the trigger.
  

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pretty_puppie

18/Female
Abilene, TX
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Posted On: March 1, 2009
AWSOMENESS!

LUVE IT.

I RIGHT POEMS TOO BUT URS ARE MORE DESIRABLE AND DEEP
Darkness_Chick

18/Female
Romania
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Posted On: January 28, 2009
THAT IS AMAZING I LOBBERED IT SO MUCH!!!!

~shelbye~
New_york_gurl7

21/Female
Canada
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Posted On: December 18, 2008
everytime i read this(and ive read it ALOT) it sends shivers down my spine! its so good...

Yaymay7923

17/Female
Port Saint Lucie, FL
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Posted On: November 23, 2008
That was really sad, dark, and emotional.
New_york_gurl7

21/Female
Canada
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Posted On: October 25, 2008
lol.
New_york_gurl7

21/Female
Canada
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Posted On: October 25, 2008
wow. very deep and grim, but good. its like...suicide in a nutshell.
FireQueen1295

17/Female
Jackson, TN
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Posted On: October 7, 2008
That was great you should really do more I loved it
Rocketship_

103/Female
Japan
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Posted On: October 6, 2008
And you say you don't write poems.

You should, more often. Because this is flat out awesome.....

I loved it.... It was so very dark. =3
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