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POEM - Rose Petal Razors

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Story Rating   4.91  with 11 vote(s)
By Ink_Thief Send DollMail
Created: 2009-01-10 16:36:23 All stories by Ink_Thief
The garden is quiet, the winds are whispering

The flowers wave in peaceful grace

They are beautiful, so much more then I

Their colours are bright, luscious

Attracting hungry bees with their sweet perfume

How I hate them

Their perfection is mocking

Their simple beauty cruel

I bend and rip one rose from its stem

If I listen just so,

I can hear its scream

It’s a pretty pearl pink

With a long green stem

Its thorns are harsh brown

And glinting sharp

I smile sickeningly at its pain

I tilt my head and mock it

Mock its agony

Its humiliation

Its everything

Then I draw the flower head across my wrist

The gentleness is brutal, the softness vindictive

And in its wake, blood red petals bloom to the surface

From the pure white stem of my arm

They uncurl to the sun in their simply beauty

They fall from my wrist like confetti

And I smile as the bloody petals fall

Before my hand wraps around the rose head

And I crush it between my fingers

I then turn and walk away,

With a soft, triumphant smile
  

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designing_till

14/Female
Riverview, FL
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Posted On: July 1, 2009
Breath Taking.

^.^ T'was Brilliant.

Left me speechless. And at that, it's really all my mouth will let me say.
Original_scree

20/Female
Zionsville, IN
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Posted On: June 25, 2009
I love you Toni. You're so amazing and talented.

--0Rii
djvangel_7647

29/Female
Davie, FL
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Posted On: May 20, 2009
this is so freaking amazing and beautiful

I LOVE IT!

Muffin01

17/Female
Rancho Palos Ver, CA
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Posted On: March 26, 2009
It's beautifully written. I like it.
pretty_puppie

18/Female
Abilene, TX
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Posted On: March 1, 2009
OMG! THATS THE SH'IT.

IT REMINDS ME OF ME.

SUMTHING I MIGHT DO.
Darkness_Chick

18/Female
Romania
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Posted On: January 28, 2009
haha LOVED it again .. dang ur really amazing at writing did you know that?? bc u r and yea..

~shelbye~
broadwaybaby90

26/Female
Virgin Islands (US)
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Posted On: January 11, 2009
i generally hate poems about cutting,

but i really like this!
pinkshine05

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: January 11, 2009
Ohmigawd.

That was so purified. T'was so...*Speechless*

I'm no good at comments so how do you expect me to write one for this...it's way past beautiful.

--Crazy Lee
Amynetta

16/Female
Australia
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Posted On: January 10, 2009
this is amazingly poetic. i love the metaphors; great work. ^^;

- amynetta
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