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POEM - Petty Little Whxres

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By Ink_Thief

Created: 2009-02-09 16:15:21

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A/N: All the scene kids at my school and else where are getting on my nerves with their 'problems' and the ruler scrapes they show off like its some sort of cool accessory to self harm.

*Rolls eyes*

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So blacken your eyes,

And cut your wrists

And moan about the lies

And how you’ve never been kissed.

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And I’ll sit back and laugh in pity

As you feed the fuel to your consternation,

Conforming to dark and ignorant insanity,

Hiding away in your self-created isolation.

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Its time to tell the truth, time to confess,

That its originality and spontaneity that you lack.

You crave attention and disordered mess,

Faking your problems for the words you get back.

--

So call me a bxtch as you deaden your eyes,

Proclaim depression and wear your ‘pills’ as pride.

Ignore the facts, your well thought out lies

And sit back as you fake black insides.

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So-called words from the heart stain a page,

Mentions of death and murder and so sad suicide

Your stupidity is enough to throw one into a rage,

Your childishness is all that hides inside.

--

You’re desperation makes me sick,

To think you’d mock people with reasons

To mark their wrists with blood thick

And embark on dark liaisons.

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So yes, blacken your eyes

And cut your wrists,

And I’ll expose your petty lies

And leave your image blitzed.

--

Simply because you annoy me, you little attention whxres,

With your sex hair and make up and bright colours galore,

What don’t the boys give you enough attention so you desperately crave more?

You’re pathetic, simpering idiots, stupidity raw

And you better pray to God that he gets you before

I do with make up wipes and scissors of silver pure.

And all because you re so fake, you petty attention craving WHXRE.

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tatortot

29/Female
Derby, IA
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Posted On: February 11, 2009
i love it it is soo very perfect, u really cary on a point.

BRAVO!

Aerokine

103/Female
South Georgia And The South Sandwich Islands
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Posted On: February 9, 2009
I love angry poems. The way you wrote this one carries your point through while still following a rhyme scheme. That's pretty hard to do, you're really talented with words.

Now because I'm being dumb and blathering I shall end this comment. ^_^

--Aeroo

brutusdog

21/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: February 9, 2009
I loved it

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My comment was rejected by TDP

I think it's because it had a tad bit of swearing... I think TDP rejects the word po.op

XD

Hehehe

This is awesome :]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]

Ow I cracked my wrist too much XD hehe

Brutie

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