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POEM - Impossible Demands

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By Ink_Thief Send DollMail
Created: 2008-11-17 14:52:50 All stories by Ink_Thief
Pressure.

It weighs down on her,

Expectations she can’t meet,

Will never meet.

It’s impossible.

Impossible to be perfect,

To be flawless.

Can’t you see?

Can’t you see,

The perfection in imperfection?

Can’t you see the beauty in flaws?

Can’t you see the splendour in normalcy?

Can’t you see the lies?

Perfection was never real,

An overrated ridiculousness

Yet you pressurize,

And you criticize,

And you break her down into tiny little pieces

You suffocate her with your dreams,

You choke her with your wishes,

You asphyxiate her with your hopes,

And you kill her,

You kill her with your desires.

‘You must be skinny,

You must be graceful,

You must be amazing

And beautiful,

And stunning.

You must turn heads

You must attract attention.’

O, can’t you see what you are doing to her?

The child you claim to love?

The child you are killing with the weight of your expectations.

You are stifling her with infeasibilities.

How long until she chokes?

How long until your smother her with your abuse?

How long until she cracks under the weight of your words?

How long until she breaks?

How far will you push her?

How long until you realise your idea of perfection

Is nothing more then a teenage pipe dream?
  

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x_Emma_x

102/Female
Longview, TX
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Posted On: May 20, 2009
I agree with Becca, perfection is an opinion word and no single person has the right to say what it means. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. That's for sure. I am called ugly at times and I'm called beautiful at other times. It's very weird.

† Emma
playboyBARBIE

102/Female
White Settlement, TX
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Posted On: March 17, 2009
i agree with oRii.

this is really well written and not really like anything we've heard in along time.

This could probably relate to alot of girls
Darkness_Chick

18/Female
Romania
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Posted On: January 28, 2009
dude i can relate to this very much ... my dad doesn't want me to be who i want to be and he hates who i am and idk ... but ... god i dont know what to say its ... its amazing ... no its more then amazing ... idk words cant describe it ... this is my fav one so far!

~shelbye~
Smiles_sunnie

20/Female
VA
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Posted On: January 6, 2009
Amazing, as well as the other poems and stories you've written.

You always seem to leave me breathless and even speechless.

=D Bravo.
Xx_Pixie_Dust_

17/Female
Canada
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Posted On: December 13, 2008
Another Amazing poem. :]

No one has the right to define perfect, beautiful or anything like that. But I guess beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

-Becca
Original_scree

20/Female
Zionsville, IN
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Posted On: November 17, 2008
Perfection is a paradox....I like this poem. It's deep and true and full of emotion.

--oRii
allinmyhead

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: November 17, 2008
wow now my idea of perfection.......is wawa!!!
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