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POEM - If I Were To Die Today

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Story Rating   4.7  with 10 vote(s)
By Ink_Thief Send DollMail
Created: 2008-12-02 16:10:52 All stories by Ink_Thief
Oh dear...(:

If I were to die today,

Slit my wrists and fade away,

Would you mourn for me like a mother should?

Or would you be glad I’m gone for good?

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If I were to die tonight,

Tie the rope and swing left to right,

Would you have a care in the world?

Would you throw me away like paper curled?

-

If I were to die this morning,

Swallow pills and here them churning,

Would you grieve the years we lost?

Would your heart freeze in sorrowful frost?

-

If I were to die in the afternoon,

Drown in water reflecting the moon,

Would you hate yourself with a passionate fire?

Would be to make it up be your most ardent desire?

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See mother, if you were to die today,

Slit your wrists and fade away,

I wouldn’t mourn like a good daughter should.

I would be glad you were gone for good.

-

And if you were to die tonight,

Tie the rope and swing left to right,

I wouldn’t have a care in the world,

And I would throw you away like paper curled.

-

And if you were die in the morning,

Swallow pills and hear them churning,

I wouldn’t grieve the years we lost

And my hard heart would be free of frost.

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And if you were to die in the afternoon,

Drown in water reflecting the moon,

I wouldn’t hate myself with a passionate fire,

And to dance on your grave would be my greatest desire.

-

See you lost me years ago,

When you watched me fade to a shadow.

And I did loved you, that part is true

Way back when my love meant something to you.

-

But I get it and I see it clearly now, like glass

I am nothing more to you then a benefit pass.

Some mother you turned out to be, harsh and blameful,

Trust me, I’ll sing gladly at your funeral.
  

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14/Female
Snell, VA
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Posted On: March 5, 2010
amazing, obviously. : )

pretty_puppie

16/Female
Abilene, TX
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Posted On: March 1, 2009
I see your pain.

read mine and comment, rate watever
Muffin01

15/Female
Rancho Palos Ver, CA
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Posted On: February 19, 2009
:o Truly amazing!

-Muffin
a_tear_on_a_ro

15/Female
Portland, OR
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Posted On: February 16, 2009
Exept rather dark....
a_tear_on_a_ro

15/Female
Portland, OR
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Posted On: February 16, 2009
Purdy

Darkness_Chick

16/Female
Romania
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Posted On: January 28, 2009
... idk wat to say but ... wow ... its amazing ... its dark and ... omg i loved every second of it ... i really did!!

~shelbye~
Amynetta

14/Female
Australia
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Posted On: January 10, 2009
wow. great poem! such talent you have.

- amynetta
Xx_Pixie_Dust_

15/Female
Canada
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Posted On: December 7, 2008
Yet another amazing story by none other than Toni! :]

-Becca
pinkshine05

17/Female
Canada
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Posted On: December 4, 2008
I loved it. Daughter hating mother. Simply, it's a genius at work.

--Crazy--
Skittles_PuNk

101/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: December 4, 2008
and I need to learn how to freaking spell.

*lucky.
Skittles_PuNk

101/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: December 4, 2008
lcuky. you have too much talent xD
gothicgirl1

19/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: December 3, 2008
Amazing. Truly....wow....

xAndy
tekimyo

14/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: December 3, 2008
why are you so good, toni?
hypa_happi_rea

15/Female
Antarctica
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Posted On: December 3, 2008
Oh wow. That was awesome. The rhyme was amazing. I can't rhym for anything.

-.^

TW
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