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Nessie drowns in the toilet AND BURNS

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By Aerokine Send DollMail
Created: 2009-02-15 17:29:27 All stories by Aerokine
Title: Nessie Drowns In The Toilet AND BURNS.

Fandom: Twifright.

Rating: Something like PGish.

Summary: Take a wild guess. Third in a series of CULLEN DEATHS.

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"Shh, don't cry, don't cry," the girl croons to her tiny daughter. "It's alright."

The little baby looks up at her and opens wide eyes, blinking twice before shutting them again. Bella almost changes her mind about the choice she had decided upon, but shakes her head silently. No. She will stay firm.

With her new strength, it's simple, really, to knock her child on the head just hard enough to put her to sleep. She could kill the thing so easily, just slide a pale hand along the back and press down, crushing her into a powder. She could tear the skull away from the body with her predator teeth, step upon the tiny body, dance on the bones of her daughter.

She could.

It was intoxicating to be in control of something, anything in her life. Ever since she met him, all of her choices had disappeared until she was nothing but a piece of his will. Whether he cared for her or not, she knew that she was at his mercy.

And she didn't care anymore.

The body is so light, so easy to carry to the stylish bathroom. Bella drops the child into the toilet bowl and slams down the lid, violently, letting the plaster chip. Then, taking a match, she sets fire to the lonely white house.

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"Mother?" The plaintive voice echoes in the cold space around her. Nessie does not know where she is, or why it hurts so much. She doesn't know why it's gradually growing warmer. She nudges the lid, but it's been weighed down by something, and won't budge. "Mother!"

The little girl can hear the crackling of flames now. She knows that fire is the way to destroy her kind, the way to kill what cannot be killed. Filled with new horror she launched herself at the sides of her prison, sobbing for mommy to come take her out. She has no way of knowing that mommy is standing outside the house, watching her prison burn. She has no way of knowing that mommy is sick of her, that mommy isn't ready for the burden of a child, especially one that grows up so fast.

She has no way of knowing, but that's all right, because she doesn't want to know.

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As the last ashes drift to the forest ground, the damp vegetation too wet to catch alight, Bella stands, alone.

She knows that when they come back to the house, they will scream, and try their best to cry. Someone will probably say, "You should have known better to leave a manic-depressive girl alone with her kid."

Someone will probably be glad about the death.

But she doesn't care anymore, because this isn't her life anymore. From now on, she will be in control.

Until a large vehicle comes along...

FIN.

AN: http://www.thedollpalace.com/story/YAY-story-dpstr215237-seTop+Rated-ty1-as0.html

That's the story with the lowest rating on here.

Oh by the way, this piece was way depressing to write. My hatred for Nessie made me want to cause lots of pain to all involved.

AND OMG MY REGRETS ARE STILL NONE!

Congratulations to Brutie and Edward Cullen Gets Hit by a Truck! They've been married and are expected to live happily ever after.

And get run over by Catbus on their anniversary. http://gothamist.com/images/catbus.jpg



--Aeroo

EDIT: Made the title more accurate.
  

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Horrors

105/Male
Broken Arrow, OK
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Posted On: March 7, 2009
This is old, but,

"NO no ... If you made things about punching babies I'd still feel uncomfortable with it, but I can't do anything about it because I really can't control your actions."

But you CAN control Aerokine's?

‡ Horrors
Aerokine

103/Female
South Georgia And The South Sandwich Islands
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Posted On: March 3, 2009
I HAVE ACCOMPLISHED MY MISSION. I MADE TONI LOL.

I feel amaaaazing now.

... Bluemoongem... uh... (sweatdrop) N-never mind...



--Aewoo
bluemoongem

19/Female

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Posted On: March 2, 2009
amazing lol and people it's just for fun... and it's not like we are going out to go and kill our babies... i mean what kind of fun is that? your supposed to hire other people to kill your babies lol jk jk don't listen to me.
Ink_Thief

19/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: February 27, 2009
Jesus, all this hubbub over fictional characters in a quite funny parody.

My my.

Anyways, yeah, still makes me LOL a lot Aero. (:
Bell_Belle

18/Female
Japan
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Posted On: February 18, 2009
NO no ... If you made things about punching babies I'd still feel uncomfortable with it, but I can't do anything about it because I really can't control your actions.

I'm a pacifist so ... I'm a very sensitive person ... My best friend is the opposite way she's got anger-issues ... and a real "B"

~Gina!
Horrors

105/Male
Broken Arrow, OK
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Posted On: February 18, 2009
Okay, so I can go around saying shiit about kiicking babies, punching babies, and EATING babies, but then someone writes a story involving violence toward a baby and everyone fre'aks out.

Yeah, that makes perfect se'nse.

‡ Horrors
Horrors

105/Male
Broken Arrow, OK
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Posted On: February 18, 2009
Then maybe you should stop biitching at someone for writing a fictional story about a fictional child that already NEVER EXISTED and go help some real children at the homeless shelter.

‡ Horrors
Authors_Note

18/Female
Caseyville, IL
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Posted On: February 17, 2009
No offense really ...

But that's a little uncalled for ... and some-what psychotic because you know .... she's just a child!

-GG-
FlyingTurtles1

103/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: February 16, 2009
WOW, Aeroo, that was the best thing i ever read!

i dnt care who dies next cause i havent read or seen Twilight at all. But do DM me if u write another!! DO!
Aerokine

103/Female
South Georgia And The South Sandwich Islands
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Posted On: February 16, 2009
So do I.

Yay, Brutie, we can be therapy buddies. My therapists have all been evil except one who was alright but then she got really annoying so I quit. And now that I'm your mother-in-law LIFE IS GREAT.

And thank you Horrors. You make an old grandma happy.
Sweet_Venom

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: February 16, 2009
Overly sensitive? I just deeply care for children.

--RINA
brutusdog

21/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: February 16, 2009
*dives in the way of rudeness at you*

I must save my babies' grandma

Don't worry *pats head* I have to go to therapy :/

My parents won't let me talk them out of it *pouty face*

People take life very seriously... :]

Before bed I dance on the graves of infants jk
Horrors

105/Male
Broken Arrow, OK
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Posted On: February 16, 2009
Sweet_Venom and Bell_Belle:

This is a completely fictional story. She is not actually going to go around torching the fuuck out of babies.

The plot is fictional, the character is fictional. There is nothing 'real' about it.

For another thing, if you're going to get all upset and "disturbed" because someone wrote a parody story about killing a baby, clearly you're painfully oversensitive.

‡ Horrors
Aerokine

103/Female
South Georgia And The South Sandwich Islands
All My Stories
Posted On: February 15, 2009
(cough) I did. This is part three.
Scythe

103/Female

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Posted On: February 15, 2009
You should make Bella die next.

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