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Hi, my name is Bebop and Zo
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By Aerokine Send DollMail
Created: 2008-10-29 21:38:00 All stories by Aerokine
This story is by Aeroo's little brother. He likes making up stories and riding his bicycle to the park. He says, "Hi."

The Wintertime Pool Party

By Aeroo's brother.

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Bebop who had a boyfriend named Zo. Bebop had pretty red hair. Zo really loves Bebop, so he invited her to a midwinter pool party in the snow. Bebop was excited! She immediately began looking for good swimming clothes.

AT THE PARTY:

She wore her best dress with lots of sparkles! The only sounds she heard was gasps.

"They must really love my swimsuit," She said.

Zo said,

"Uhhh..."

Bebop is very silly sometimes, so she jumped in the freezing water and said, "It's warm!!!!!!!!"

"Uhhh..."

Then she swam around for a while. Then she did some diving practice. Then she did some diving for rings.

Finally it was time to go home.

"Hey... wait a minute..." Bebop said.

Zo thought, finally she will realize her mistake!

"I forgot to do laps!"

Zo fell over in shock.

THE END.

I love my brother's imagination. He makes me laugh so hard.

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Aerokine

103/Female
South Georgia And The South Sandwich Islands
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Posted On: March 3, 2009
He says, "They took out the snow. Duh."

XD

I wonder how they did it.
Aerokine

103/Female
South Georgia And The South Sandwich Islands
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Posted On: March 3, 2009
I don't know, I'll ask my brother... hang on.
bluemoongem

19/Female

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Posted On: March 2, 2009
lol AWESOMNESS
bluemoongem

19/Female

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Posted On: March 2, 2009
wow... lol mid winter pool party? lol sounds like fun, i'll be the first one it lol or would it be covered in like a ba-gillion inches of snow lol
Aerokine

103/Female
South Georgia And The South Sandwich Islands
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Posted On: January 11, 2009
He's, like, nine. >.< Lol.
superchickfan1

21/Female
West Mountain, ID
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Posted On: December 29, 2008
LOL. How old is ur bro?
mousiegirl

35/Female
Canada
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Posted On: October 29, 2008
ha...thats funny.
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