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Hi, my name is Claire
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 | My Boyfriend is a Murderer |
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 4.33 with 6 vote(s)
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| Created: 2008-06-23 00:06:59 |
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"My boyfriend's a murderer. I don't know what else to say. I guess this may come as a bit of a shock to you since we both know he's like one the most popular kids in school, football, baseball, hockey, he's awesome. I promised him I wouldn't tell, but I just had to say something, but promise me you won't tell the police cause he says if he goes to jail his twin brother, Jared, will kill me." I told my best friend. I could feel the hot tears flow out as I told my friend about how I had found him standing over the dead body of woman a couple of weeks ago. He had seen me as I was running away. Running after me, he tackled me to the ground and made me promise I wouldn't say anything.
As I told her this I could see Derek, my boyfriend, causally ring my doorbell. We had been sitting in my room. He was probably here to see if I had told anyone yet. Well as a matter of fact I did.
I opened my front door to see Derek standing all-perfect, his football jacket and jeans fit him so nicely. You could practically see his muscles through his jacket. His soft dark hair curled on the ends and his height, well let’s just says he's a good six inches above me, and I'm like 5'6. "Hey Claire." he said to me winking and taking my hand.
Shoving the door closed behind me, Derek pulled me to our porch swing. I'm glad I had changed into my jeans and blue sweatshirt it was freezing outside.
Smiling sweetly, although it had a hint of evil in it, Derek said, "I know you told your friend."
I tensed, "Good job, now I have to kill her." Derek stood and walked into my house, I still sat on my porch, frozen by surprise. I got over it and fast. No one kills my best friend. I jumped up and ran inside, Derek stood in my room, my lamp in his hands. I could see my friend lying at his feet, unconscious luckily. I pulled the lamp out his hands.
Surprised, Derek spun on me. "Well don't blame me, you’re the one who told her." Derek pulled out his phone and texted something to someone.
"Where are your folks?" He asked me.
"They're at work." I said, knowing that's exactly what he wanted to hear. This is the point where I wished I had a sibling, or even a maid. No I had to be stuck here in my house, with no one around except my friend who lye unconscious on the floor.
"Good." he said texting something else. Putting his phone back in his pocket, Derek lunged at me. I really was not expecting this, so he whammed me right into the wall. I yelped in fright, but we lived in real loud city, so no one could have ever heard me. Plus, it was right after school and parents were still at work.
Derek laughed and whispered in my ear, "Sorry, just remember it's your fault." The doorbell rang. Finally some help, I thought that's what it was until Derek opened the door, with me in his arms. Only when he opened it, there was Jared. Okay their so there not identical twins, but they do look a lot a like I mean for one thing they were both wearing the same outfit, Jared's jean were a little more faded and his jacket had his name on it, but when I saw Jared for a second I thought it was like a clone or something.
"Hey bro." Jared said stepping into the house. I could feel myself close to fainting. "What's going on?" he asked seeing me trapped in his death grip.
"Oh.", Derek started, "Well she told her friend about me so now I have to kill her friend."
"Why don't you just kill both of them?" Jared asked eyeing me. Let me just take this moment to say, he hates me, so I guess he wanted me dead, "No." Derek said, with complete calmness, "You know her parents have money and if I kill her everyone will suspect me, plus, well, she's my alibi."
Jared shrugged, "Okay." Derek pushed me into Jared, "Hold her I'll go get her friend." Jared looked at me from arms length away. He didn't a very good grip on me so I ripped out of his grasp and ran for the door. I almost had it open when something hard hit the back of my head and I blacked out.
When I woke up I found myself in back seat of Derek's expedition. I attempted to sit up and found my hands and feet tied together with masking tape. I sat up the best I could and saw we were parked at the lake. I saw Derek lift a bag and throw it into the lake.
"Derek!" I screamed, "Don't kill her." I could feel myself crying for like the tenth time today. Jared popped up in front of me; I guess he had been sitting in the front seat. Reaching back, Jared grabbed my collar and pulled me close to him, "He already killed her." I bit my lip, this can't be happening. Only, it is. Derek sat in the drivers seat. I could see the blood on his shirt.
Fighting back my tears I whispered, "How could you?" Derek turned to look at me. He shrugged. Jared let me fall to the floor, but not after laughing at me. Jerk, they both were, Jerks! I mean how could they just kill someone. The bump on the ground in the car dug into my back and I could tell the tape on my hands was going to hurt when I got it off. I felt the car make a stop.
Derek looked down at me and sighed. Jared got out of the car and opened the back door. Taking out a knife he cut my hands and ankles free. Then pulling me forcefully out of the car he whispered, "Don't you say a word."
I woke up the next morning from a nightmare. I don't exactly remember the dream, but I know it was really bad and I ended up dead.
"Claire? Are you alright?" David asked waving his hand in front of my face. I had gone to the mall and met up with my other friend, Laura, and her cousin was there, David. He was so sweet to me, he shook my hand and we're both in the same grade, he just transferred to my school.
"I'm fine." I said forcing a smile.
"No your not." he said, taking my hand in his and smiling at me, "Come on tell me, it's not like you'll die if you tell me."
"No." I said, "You will." Shocked that I said this David studied my hand.
"Ummm... why don't we go buy you some new shoes." Laura said pulling me up from the bench.
"I have to go, this just is no fun knowing that-" I stopped myself knowing I was about to say my best friend is dead, but I held my tongue and walked away. I could hear David and Laura calling my name and racing to catch up with me. Slipping away into a Red Robin, I noticed Jared sitting at a table with a boy I didn't know. Slowly I tip-toed out and bumped right into Derek. Oh joy just what I needed.
"Hey Claire, how's life without a best friend." Derek said, talking in such a low voice I could barely pick up the words, but unfortunately I did.
"Go away I don't want to see you ever again." I said with clenched teeth. My statement spread a crooked smile across his face.
"Is that so." Derek said walking away. I could see him laughing as he sat down next to his brother. As I turned to walk away I noticed David standing at the door looking for me.
"Claire, there you are. We were looking everywhere for you. Why'd you take off?" I could feel Derek's stare piercing my back as David walked up to me and took my hand. Chatting away, David began to talk about some store they went in and saw a old lady picking out fashionable clothes. Even though I acted like I was listening, I wasn't. I could still feel Derek watching us chat.
"Hey Claire. Who's your friend." Derek said, I hadn't realized he was so close. David turned and shook Derek's hand, "Hi, I'm David, my cousin Laura is one of Claire's best friends. I'm staying with her while my parents are in Europe studying for something. Who are you?" Derek looked shocked at how fast David talked, probably because he's a geek.
"I'm Claire's boyfriend, Derek."
"Oh well great to meet you I have to go." David shuffled away frantically looking for an escape route. I sulked away from Derek, quietly, but I guess not quietly enough since he reached out and pulled me toward him.
"Derek, let go of my arm I'm going home."
"No, you're staying with me the rest of the day I don't want you going and telling the world." As he said this I fought the urge to cry over my best friend, but I couldn't hold it in. Sobbing, I fell to my knees in the middle of the mall. My friends face was in my head, "Get up." I could hear him say. He was probably embarrassed to be seen with a crying girl. My crying became louder as Derek tried to lift me off the ground. His big hands wrapped around my shoulders and it was so obvious it was an act. Couldn't someone see I didn't want this big jerk touching me.
"Claire!" Laura yelled running up and hugging me, forcing Derek to let go, "David said he met Derek and I just wanted to see you before we leave, you want to come? We're going to get ice cream, you think that will cheer you up?" It was just so sweet of her not to ask me what was wrong in front of everyone since I probably would have cried harder. I nodded and followed Laura away from Derek.
"You know, Derek seems like such a jerk, why are you dating him?" Laura asked me as we ate ice cream. I shrugged and looked at David. He was still getting his ice cream, the person that worked here didn't understand much English and David was trouble telling the guy he wanted gummy bears.
"Claire! Come on, you need to see this." I looked towards the door to see Jared smiling at me, "Come on, we're going over to the lake, your friends can come."
"Oh okay!" Laura said jumping up, she had the biggest crush on Jared, it was kind of sad.
"No." I said firmly sitting down, he was not going to kill another one of my friends.
"Okay then she can come and you can stay here." I jumped up, "Jared don't please." Everyone in The Golden Spoon turned to look at me. My eyes were still all puffy and red from crying and new tears began to form, I don't blame them for looking.
"Don't what?" he asked with an amused smile, a horn honked from outside, Derek yelled from his car, "Come on Claire!" I let the first tear fall and heard David walk up behind me.
"What's going on?" he asked, taking a huge bite from his ice cream.
"Nothing." I said, pulling Laura back into her chair. Only Jared walked up and seeing that she like him used it to his advantage. Taking Laura's hand he said, "Come on, it's really cool." Laura smiled and followed him to the car. I stood and raced after them, David at my heels. The door to the car swung open; Derek smiled at me saying, "Hop in." I sucked in my breath and got in. No one kills two of my best friends. Luckily David got in too.
"Nice car." David said with a nervous shake in his voice.
"Thanks." Derek said casually, driving in a not very straight line I might add. I mean you'd think he'd been drinking. Jared sat in the front next to him and David, Laura and I sat in the back. My mind traced back to when I was lying on the floor here. The was masking tape balled up on the floor and I picked it up, fingering it.
"What's this tape for?" I asked with a sarcastic voice although the voice in my head was screaming, ‘Get out of the car you dumbo head.'
"Ummm..." Derek said frantically thinking of an answer, a lie of course.
"You know I don't know what it is... probably to tie up your friend, not sure, I mean we took it off before he killed her anyways." Jared said, and then burst out laughing, Laura joined. David smiled another nervous smile. Of course I'm just sitting there frowning.
"We're here." Derek said stopping the car and smirking at me. I looked out the window and wasn't at all surprised to see we were at the lake. Jared opened the door for Laura and helped her get out. I looked over at David to find him already out of the car. A hand slid in the car and grabbed my elbow, pulling me out Derek said, "Don't be a scaredy cat, you know this is how we roll."
"Jared!" he turned suddenly at my outburst and laughed saying, "What? I'm not going to hurt her." Then he took her hand and walked further into the forest, without of course winking at me. This set me off. Now before I tell you what happened to Laura you have to realize that this is all by a lake. Civilization is ten miles away, and no one has a cell phone.
"Jared! Do not kill my best friend!" I charged toward him, my heels kicking up dirt, only I wasn't moving forward I was sort of just destroying the ground beneath me. Derek had me around my waist and Jared was just laughing, leading a confused, but totally love struck Laura into the woods. Tears formed on the corners of my eyes.
"Claire?" David asked, I had forgotten about him at this point and I was frantic. Taking a handful of his shirt I whispered in his ear, "Run." David stood frozen. Derek still had a hold of me.
"What's going on?" Derek asked, dropping his arm from my waist and laying his arms around my shoulders instead. Gosh, he was sly, it looked like he was just acting like a couple, but I know his arms were restraining me.
"Derek, let me go." I said, struggling to get his arms off me. He had these muscles that at first sight of him every girl in the universe just says in their head, 'Oh my gosh, that is the hottest man alive.' although their not realizing he's a murderer. Why do I have to be the unlucky one he thinks is hot back? Stupid green eyes and perfectly straight blonde hair, I curse my mom for her complete hotness. I really shouldn't have gotten so far in Drama and become the leads just since he found my 'acting' as he says, cute. I should never have agreed to go out with him! Okay getting off the moment.
"Maybe I should leave." David said backing away from us.
"No don't worry. Claire's just shy to be a couple around people she doesn't know that well." Derek said with such smoothness is his voice that I found myself closing my eyes at the tone of it. Of course I didn't since his arms were still touching me.
"Derek! Stop! Please! Just let him go home, don’t let Jared hurt her!" I was pretty much hysterical. The tears were flowing really hard down my face. Suddenly Derek dropped me on the floor and clubbed David in the side of the head. Biting my lip to keep from screaming and sobbing, I crawled behind a tree and stood. Being as quick and quiet as possible to get away, I ran after Jared and Laura. I know I have should have stayed to help David, but if you think about it I was getting Derek away from David.
"Claire, you get back here before I kill you." Derek yelled chasing after me. It was then I saw Jared finger a pocketknife behind his back. Laura sat next to him chatting about... something I forget, probably about her dog.
"Jared stop." I said firmly standing in front of him. Taking Laura's hand, I pulled her up-ignoring her protests-that is until Derek came up and attempted to tackle me. Of course I was ready and I ducked under and pulled Laura with me, "Laura come on!" I yelled jumping over a log, toward the car. I could hear Jared and Derek running after us and I was very aware that if I didn't succeed it could be devastating.
Reaching the car I noticed Derek had dragged in David already, probably. Pushing Laura into the car I got in and shut the door. I locked the doors, but Derek and Jared still swarmed the car, Derek stood in front and Jared in back.
"What's going on?" Laura asked, tears forming in the corners of her eyes, her cousin’s head was in her lap. I could see he was breathing, but there was a huge bump on his head. Derek was yelling something at me, but I ignored it.
"Laura, listen to me, these boys will kill you. We have to get out of here now." I said in my serious voice that I don't use very often. Laura shook her head in disbelief. I knew that I had to get them out of here and once and for all go to the police and stay in the station until they're both caught and put in jail, the problem is their both still seventeen and not adults. I don't know what will happen at the trial.
Derek banged my window making me jump, seeing the opportunity to drive forward without running him over I did. I have a driver's license, but I didn't have it with me which isn't that bad since if I was speeding maybe the police would take me into the station or something.
"Claire, slow down!" Laura screamed as I jolted forward, the car was so much bigger than my little mustang, maybe it wasn't such a good idea going so fast, you know, know that I think about it, even if I was going like 40 mph it wouldn't matter. I mean they don't have a car.
Pulling up to the hospital, we brought in David; the nurses took him into a room with lots of machines.
"Please wait in the waiting room." The nurse with the giant hair said, ushering us out.
"Laura, I'm going to go the police now." I said standing, "You stay here and watch your back for them." She nodded as I walked out.
Getting to the police station was not fun, I mean it's only like a block away, but constantly looking to the left to the right, I mean, it's crazy! I eventually made it across and got in. The police officers were all jumping around with papers in their hands and things, and then one paper came and landed at my feet. Picking it up I noticed it was a family photo. Derek, Jared and their dad were standing together all with fishing poles.
A man yanked the photo out of my hand and said rudely, "Why are you here?"
"I'd like to report a crime." I said, and then looking up I realized this man was their father. My blood ran ice cold.
"What's the crime?" he asked, turning serious. I knew I couldn't tell their father.
"Mam." he asked, and then putting his arm around me he led me to a chair, "When your ready to talk just tell someone." Then he shuffled away, his heels squeaking at every step.
"Excuse me, is there a way I could go into one of those rooms and report a crime?" I asked the lady at the desk. She had the biggest hair ever, even bigger than the lady at the hospital. Plus it was like platinum blonde, you see it and go, wow use any more hair spray on your curls lady, you know.
"Of course sweety." she said, talking into the phone she called the chief and I was led into one of those little rooms where they interrogate the bad people. I guess good people too since I was in there.
"What's your problem?" The chief said, sitting down in the chair opposite me.
"It's just." I started thinking over every word I talked so slow you'd think I was from Kentucky or something-no offence-,"These two guys... they killed my best friend." I let the tears fall, I probably shouldn't have, but I had the big lump in my throat so I couldn't talk if I held them in.
"Who?" He asked taking out a pad of paper and pencil. I wrote down Derek and Jared's names. He looked at it and laughed, "Kid, these are the two greatest kids in town, you must be mistaken." I stood.
"Derek is my boyfriend, I caught him killing a girl and he's using me as an alibi right now and I turn them in they'll kill me, but you know what I had to because they put David in the hospital, Laura is in shock and now my life is in danger. Do you really think I would get the names wrong?" The police officer looked shocked at my sudden outburst. I sat and folded my sweaty arms into my sweaty chest. It was pretty gross, but at least I was safe here. That's what I thought at least.
"What are going on about my sons?" A voice asked, I looked up and was surprised to see Derek, Jared, and their dad all standing in front of me. Jumping up I knocked over my chair, it fell with a loud clank.
"She thinks we're murderer's." Jared said with amusement in his voice.
"No, stop it." I said falling into a sob in the corner of the room, I knew they were going to kill me right here, right now.
"What's wrong?" Derek asked, kneeling in front of me, "Come on I'll take you home." He took my hand and began to pull me up, but I pulled away and curled into a tighter ball.
"Go away." I sobbed attempting to block out the sound of his voice. Derek shrugged and stood again. Another police officer came in and said, "Claire, please do we need to take you to the hospital." This only made me sob harder. So eventually I ended up in a police car, Derek and Jared next to me. When Derek put his arm around my shoulder I brushed it off and sobbed louder. I wasn't sure if I could sob any louder, but I guess I could since Jared got so angry he stuck his hand over my mouth. Which I would like to add did not smell good. Eventually we had been driving for a lot longer than I had expected, I mean the hospital is across the street.
"Where are we going?” I asked, after pulling Jared's hand off my face. The driver didn't even flinch.
"You told them now we're keeping our end of the bargain." My blood turned to ice as Derek said this.
"What." I said, my voice was shaky but I didn't care, "What are you talking about. You let me out of this car right now!" I smacked Derek with my hand making my hand sting very badly, but it didn't matter, it just made him mad.
"Claire that was stupid." Derek said taking my right hand in his and pulling my left hand with it.
"Claire." Jared said. I turned my head towards him just in time to see him pull out a stick and whack me with it. I blacked out with my head on the seat, the car going further and further into the woods.
When I woke I found myself lying on a bed. It was a nice bed, until of course I looked up and realized Laura was lying next to me, dead. Her blood was dried around her head, a huge gash showed in her forehead. I sat up to find my wrists tied together. Looking around the room I searched the room for a weapon, nothing just a bare room with a metal bed. Filled with stuff not springs.
"Not fair." I screamed in frustration, getting up from the bed and walking to the door. Trying to pry open a locked door is hard, and even harder when your hands are tied together. Then suddenly the door was open and I was falling into the arms of Derek.
"I see your awake." Derek said pulling me on my feet,"I made breakfast." Pulling me by my wrists, Derek led me down the hall into a small kitchen.
"Hello." Jared said taking a bite of pancakes, "Wait are you feeding her?" Derek nodded and sat me down on as chair.
"Your so stupid." Jared yelled pulling a butcher knife from the counter. Then stabbing Derek in the cheat, he laughed. I on the other hand screamed and attempted to run, but it's hard I tell you. Jared merely reached out and pulled me to him. Then taking a newspaper off the counter he shoved it in my face.
"Young boy dies in hospital, huge bump on side of head causes major internal bleeding." Jared read to me, "Sound familiar?" Tears formed in my eyes as I realized David had died. I had put myself in danger, all my friends are dead, my family will never see me, the man driving the police car lie in the front seat of it, blow to his head too. As I realized all this Jared stabbed me. |
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