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Learn to Rush-prolouge-

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Story Rating   4.63  with 19 vote(s)
By CaRrOt Send DollMail
Created: 2008-08-10 15:59:24 All stories by CaRrOt
Hey! You guys probably remember Baby from Five Minutes To Midnight and Who Knew It Could Last. Well as you know my computer crashed,causing my stories to be deleted,and only God know's why. So here I am re-writing Five Minutes To Midnight,only this time it's called Learn to Rush,as you can see above.

=D

This time it's going to be from Baby's point of view,who's based on Peggie. Z will be making his apparence in the first story which should be either written later on today,or tommorrow morning. Hopefully no later.

So I hope you enjoy this little bit that I'm writing.

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I sighed as I layed down on my bed,my lime green bow pushing into my head. I could see the black tips of my blond hair,obviously dyed. Lime green and black were my favriote colors while My Chemical Romance was my favriote band. I sat up suddnly,my cell phone begining to vibrate on my bedside table. It stopped vibrating and the ring tone came on,Nine in the Afternoon by Panic! At the Disco,Z's ringtone. I grabbed my phone and pressed the green call button which,oddly enough since I didn't make the cell phone,was the pick up button.

"Hey." I said,trying to swallow the excitment that always bubbles inside of me when he calls.

"Hey Baby." Z's voice said,coming from the other end of the line. I could hear his parents in the background,well more his dad.

"You get in another fight?" I asked worridly.

"Ya." Z said, "Can I come over for the night?"

"Of course Z. Get over here now."

I heard something crash in the background and I know Z's dad just threw something at his mom.

"Hurry Z."

"I'll be over in a minute Baby."

"Bye."

"Later."

We hung up. I laied back down,thinking about all the horrible things Z had to put up with. He was to scared to call C.P.S. on his dad,he was worried about his mom,what they would do with her since she never filed divorce,or turned him in. Z didn't want him mom to get hurt while bringing his dad down. He's told me countless times that he doesn't want that. He hates it. He hates his life,he hate's his dad,but he loves his mom. At the moment Z had a girlfriend,Alicia Brown,and I had a boyfriend. We're best friends but I always want to think diffrently. I loved Z way more then as a friend. I mean he wasn't at the brotherly stage. Could I love my best friend more then that? Z and I are 17. One of us staging love,unsure of what the other thought.

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Z rumaged around his overly dirty room,on a frantic search for clean clothes to throw in an over night bag. Every now and then he heard a crash from downstaris,where his dad was throwing emptry beer bottles at the wall. Z knew his routine all to well.

Finding what he was looking for,a clean shirt,he chucked in his bag and began searching in his drawers for socks. Finding them he added them to his bag. He grabbed his cell phoen and flicked it open,looking at his screen saver. Baby stared back at up him with a grin on her face. He knew he was on Baby's screen saver.

Z sliped his phone in his pocket,his thoughts wandering to Baby,his best friend.

There was another crash from down staris and a squeal of pain and some drunkin laughter. Sounded like his dad had hit the dog.

Z grabbed his bag with his packed things and threw open the window and began to climb down the ladder.

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Okay you guys! Well that's the start of Learn to Rush. Let me know if I should continue with this series. It used to be Z's point of view but I decided to change it to Baby,considering how cool everyone thinks she is.

=]]

See Peggie,your cool!



Sorry. Inside joke with me and Toni.

=D

Anyway,let me know. Thanks bunches for reading!

Rawr,

--Carrot Lee Spice--
  

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amberh081093

18/Female
Tucson, AZ
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Posted On: February 10, 2009
how many times do i have to ask for you to dm me when you start a new story? from now on im gonna demand that you do capishe? (did i spell that right?):S)
xXLucyXx

17/Female
Snell, VA
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Posted On: September 1, 2008
OMGNESS, loved it so. As always CaRrot, your like the best.

>.< I know I agree, STOP BEING SO WICKEDLY TALENTED. I CAN'T KEEP UP.

HOW AWESOME!

-.- Sudden outburst sorry. Your stories have that effect on me though.

Luuffled it. *absorbs* GREAT WORK

--Lucy--
ice_pixie_1

26/Female
MD
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Posted On: August 19, 2008
Keep me posted!
shootlikeagirl

20/Female
Blue Springs, MO
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Posted On: August 19, 2008
Awesome!!
CaRrOt

19/Female
Abraham, WV
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Posted On: August 17, 2008
-claps-

Yay! I'm glad I didn't write to fast then. I need to go write the second one but I'm feeling to lazy...

Rawr,

[[=Carrot Lee=]]
avidgurl12

103/Female
Cary, NC
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Posted On: August 14, 2008
You guys need to write LESS!

I was grounded for one MEASLY week and I come back and there is 10 pages I have to go throught.

But I love this!

idontcarewhatt

20/Female
Stockton, CA
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
LOVE IT love it love it.

-HUGGLES CARROT-

Sorry it took me so long to find this, I didn't know what the heck it was - KEEP ME POSTED ON EVERYTHING YOU DO BIITCH!

Love you :]

[Chey]
Baby_Gurl_4eva

18/Female
Ireland
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Posted On: August 11, 2008
STOP BEING SO WICKED!

x
rocky095

22/Female
East Highland, CA
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Posted On: August 11, 2008
yes you should definetly continue! =]

it was amazingly brilliiant

-stef
CaRrOt

19/Female
Abraham, WV
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Posted On: August 10, 2008
I know.

Rawr,

[[=Carrot Lee=]]
Lunar_Wolf_Spa

17/Female
Martinez, GA
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Posted On: August 10, 2008
...................WICKEDLY AWESOME......................
CaRrOt

19/Female
Abraham, WV
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Posted On: August 10, 2008
You can lick them I guess.

-backs away some more-

I don't know if Toni has germs though.

Rawr,

[[=Carrot Lee=]]
LyingNaked

18/Female
Australia
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Posted On: August 10, 2008
It's totally bloody awesome. As if you didn't know that, Carrot. Baby is so much more awesome than me, though. I mean, she's just wicked! Ha. Can I lick 'em, too? Does Toni have germs?

- peggzstickles
PuppiLuv

17/Female
Virgin Islands (US)
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Posted On: August 10, 2008
I like it but it would be better if you could continue who knew it would last. But this is perfection. Continue and keep meh posted! Carrot is the best writer ever! And I'm 3rd!

-Mizz Converse-
CaRrOt

19/Female
Abraham, WV
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Posted On: August 10, 2008
I'm offically distrubed.

Toni just licked Baby and Z.

-backs away slowly-

Rawr,

[[=Carrot Lee=]]
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