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Story Rating   4.87  with 15 vote(s)
By CaRrOt Send DollMail
Created: 2008-08-10 20:29:38 All stories by CaRrOt
I ran towards the kitchen early the next morning,sticking a ridiculously huge bow in my hair as I charged down the hall. Z came walking out of his room at the wrong moment,causing me to run into him and we both tumbled to the floor. I sat up on top of him,my hair in my face. I shoved it out with my hands to see Z grinning up at me.

"What?" I asked standing up and helping Z up.

"Nothing." Z said quickly, "What's up with the bow?"

"Just thought I'd make a scene."

"Baby,it's almost as big as my head."

"How's this my fault?"

"Hey!"

"You said it first." I cut in before he could be mean to me.

We walked into the kitchen and I grabbed a piece of toast and shoved it in the toaster. I leaned against the counter ready to grab it when it was ready. Z stood by me,looking board. He yawned widly and my toast popped up and Z snatched it. He shoved it in his mouth with a big grin.

"I could have made you some!" I whinned shoving more toast in the toaster.

"But you didn't." Z grinned.

"Z,you know you have to ask."

"You know you deserve the attic bedroom!"

"Good god Z. I don't even WANT that room."

"Well it should be the guest room then."

"Well maybe it will be some day."

My house had four floors in it but I chose to live on the ground floor. It was closer to the kitchen anyhow. I didn't mean living in a small room. I didn't do hardly anything in there but sit in there and pout. I had my own computer but I hardly got on it. Myspace had to be the most boaring website if nobody was online. That and I could always talk to them at school. If I wanted. Now my cell phone,completely diffrent story. I probably could live without it,but Z's dad hates me so we have to go to texting sometimes just to talk. It's horrible. Z and I both hate texting but we don't always get our way. If Z's caught talking to me either his truck get's beat up or he does. His dad was so slow now it was mostly Z's truck that got all the rath.

I grabbed my toast as it popped up and my mom came walking into the room.

"Morning mama. I have to get to school. We're late." I said distractedly kissing her on the cheek and shoving toast in my mouth.

"Hope,hunny,we need to talk." my mom said.

"What?" I asked,crumbs falling from my mouth.

"Z,darling,could you wait in the car?"

Z shrugged and flashed my mom a grin. He strolled out to the truck and I heard the engine roar to life and die. I could hear Z yelling curse words at it. I smiled slightly and looked at my mom who was frowning hard.

"What is it mama?" I asked.

"Hope,your brother was killed." my mama choked.

I dropped the rest of my toast with a gasp.

"M-Michael?" I gasped,falling into a chair. I heard the front door open and Z walked in. My mom must have been crying because she left the room.

"What's wrong?" Z asked.

I couldn't bring myself to reply.

I loved Michael. Who would have killed an innocent 12 year old?
  

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rere91994

17/Female
Lansdale, PA
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Posted On: March 6, 2009
That's perfectly awful! I agree with what Baby thought, who on this Earth would kill a twelve year old?

I loved it, and will read the rest of it in a moment! Except, amd I do not mean to seem rude, for I have done worse than you have many, many times, but you might need to double check your spelling. Also, bread goes in a toaster, not toast. Alright, I am done being mean.

Five Stars!
amberh081093

18/Female
Tucson, AZ
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Posted On: February 10, 2009
okay C. question 1: what the heck is wrong with you? killing a poor innocet twelve year old

question 2: tell me how long this is gonna be and i'll keep reading

Rosey-Posey out!
Emo_Girl_12345

20/Female
Longview, TX
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Posted On: January 21, 2009
*Twitches not twitched.

..::Cassi::.. [Is on to you]
Emo_Girl_12345

20/Female
Longview, TX
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Posted On: January 21, 2009
OH.

MY.

GOD.

HOW COULD YOU!!

CaRrOt IS A BLOODY MURDERER!!!!!

MURDERER ON THE LOOSE!!!!!!!!!

*Runs until hits wall, screams, and twitched uncontrollably*

..::Cassi::.. [Knows your secret]
shootlikeagirl

20/Female
Blue Springs, MO
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Posted On: August 19, 2008
HE WAS ONLY 12!!!! jeez that just rude!!
vampirequeen1

29/Female
Largo, FL
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Posted On: August 15, 2008
That's so sad that then brother died *squints eyes* "Did you do it?"

Anyway its really good!! I love it!!

VampireQueen1
CaRrOt

19/Female
Abraham, WV
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
Lolz.

You guys rock.

Rawr,

[[=Carrot Lee=]]

-hides under a Death Eater hood and slinks into the shadows...-
idontcarewhatt

20/Female
Stockton, CA
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
NOOOOOO! Poor little baby... [[[[

-KILLS RANDOM PEOPLE IN HOPES OF FINDING MICHAEL'S KILLER-

well, maybe that wasn't the best idea...

wonderful.

[Chey]
PuppiLuv

17/Female
Virgin Islands (US)
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Posted On: August 12, 2008
awww it's sooo cute. And keep me posted... ur not annoying me

-Mizz Converse-
SilverWinterWa

17/Female
Fredericktown, PA
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Posted On: August 11, 2008
=-] i love this story
MudfurXD

19/Female
Huntsville, AL
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Posted On: August 11, 2008
-pionts dramaticly to the air- IT WAS Z'S DAD! I JUST KNOW IT!!!!!

CaRrOt, with you having all these good stories, I'm gunna have to like, live on my computer to see them. Dx

Oh well. It'd be worth it.

Keep me posted.

~Mud
PinkRoseTears

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: August 11, 2008
Not nice.

Not nice at all.

Good story though =D
Lunar_Wolf_Spa

17/Female
Martinez, GA
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Posted On: August 11, 2008
ZOMFG
rocky095

22/Female
East Highland, CA
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Posted On: August 11, 2008
What!?! that is indeed very sad poor Baby =[

-stef
LyingNaked

18/Female
Australia
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Posted On: August 11, 2008
Baby! -squeaks-

- peggzstickles
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