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It's Hurting...

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By pinkshine05 Send DollMail
Created: 2009-06-20 11:01:16 All stories by pinkshine05
A/N: Don't mind all the heartbreaking poems I'll be writing...the pain is just killing me. Still heartbroken that's me. Thanks. Enjoy. ^^

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I want to go,

Back to the start

I want you to know,

That I've fallen apart

Pieces of me are missing

While my heart,

Just keeps on breaking...

It's hurting...

Though I'm trying to get through somehow

But now,

It feels too late

We've tried two times...

But you're never there,

When I want you mine

It's not fair

After all that I've cared

I end up crying,

All day and night

Why is this always happening?

It's not alright...

It's hurting...

You're not here no more

Why did you go?

And leave me sore?

I need to know,

Even though it was a rush

You know,

How I miss you so much

It was my happiest day

Before you walked away

Before you stopped to say...I love you

It became untrue...

I've always missed you

Though you were right here

Even if it was true

It wasn't so clear

Every time that I shed a tear...

It all comes back to me

That painful fear,

Of being hurt again...

It's breaking,

It's dying,

It's aching,

Its hurting...

Just break it

Pain will never hurt,

After all,

That's all I've ever felt...

Until you came along,

Absolutely nothing was wrong...

And I felt so strong,

Before you were gone...

So hurry up,

And do it,

I cant stand it,

Just break it

It's hurting...
  

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sarahco777

14/Female
Colorado Springs, CO
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Posted On: June 22, 2009
Awesome poem.

-Sarah
brutusdog

21/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: June 21, 2009
Its lovely :]]]]]]]]]]]

Brutie
PinkRoseTears

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: June 20, 2009
PinkRoseTears

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: June 20, 2009
Super beautiful!&hearts

You are amazing at this kind of stuff.

Keep going. =)

&heartsBubbi
zzxcc

14/Female
Hampton, VA
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Posted On: June 20, 2009
that was sooooooo pretty it made me think of the break up i just went thro i would love it if you read the poem i made for that break up i didnt name it so i think its called -unknown- so if you ever get a chance go ahead and read it and maybe leave a comment
LipsofPoison

18/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: June 20, 2009
That's great :]
Blackened_Suns

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: June 20, 2009
its beautiful.

(:

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