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Hi, my name is Brie
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It Will Not Pass

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Story Rating   4.86  with 7 vote(s)
By emo_ballerina Send DollMail
Created: 2008-08-04 20:20:42 All stories by emo_ballerina
First grade, i can't believe it

thats when i met you

best friends with no concern

not a care in the world

other people and their thoughts

not once was a bother

we stood our ground

and had each other's back

second grade, you played the violen

so beautifully you did indeed

i told Mrs. Quintero

and God became your listener

five years went by

seventh grade, could it be?

our harmony slipped

but only just a little

and so eight grade came

our final year together

you going to public

and i to private

there were so many things

i wanted to tell you

but im so sorry

i just didn't know how

i wish i could have been there

be a better friend

i failed so miserably

and it follows me til this day

maybe it was ment to be

but never will i let

such an amazing friendship pass

in the end it all could suck ducks

but im trying so hard,

though it may not seem,

to keep the fire burning

and the harmnony singing
  

Member Comments  
broadwaybaby90

26/Female
Virgin Islands (US)
All My Stories
Posted On: August 19, 2008
I love, "It all could suck ducks"
cutiefliesby

104/Female
Togo
All My Stories
Posted On: August 5, 2008
its really good
designing_till

14/Female
Riverview, FL
All My Stories
Posted On: July 26, 2008
Aw..

I lubbles it..

I would like for you to re4ad some of my other poems.

But then I don't want to torture you

by making you read all 30 something of them..
PinkRoseTears

17/Female
United Kingdom
All My Stories
Posted On: July 26, 2008
Kind of sad, but very good!
Original_scree

20/Female
Zionsville, IN
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Posted On: July 21, 2008
Beautiful. I know how that is. To have a friendship slipping through your fingers like that. I've seen it and had it happen to me.

--0Rii
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