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Hi, my name is Faith
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I went to a b-day party...

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By qazqaz Send DollMail
Created: 2008-06-19 16:53:43 All stories by qazqaz
I went to a birthday party

And remembered what you said.

You told me not to drink at all.

So I had sprite instead.

I felt proud of myself

the way you said I would.

That I didn't choose to drink and drive .

Though some friends said I should.

I knew I made a healthy choice.

And your advice to me was right.

As the party finally ended

and the kids drove out of sight

I got into my own car

sure to make it home in one peice.

Not knowing what was coming.

Something I expected least.

Now I'm lying on the pavement,

and I hear the policeman say,

"The kid who caused this wreck was drunk."

His voice seems far away.

My own blood is all around me,

as I try hard not to cry.

I can hear the paramadic say,

"This girl is goint to die."

I'm sure the guy had no idea

While he was flying high.

Because he chose to drink and drive

That I would have to die.

So why do people do it?

Knowing that it ruins lives.

But now the pain is cutting me

like a hundred stabbing knives.

Tell sister not to be afraid.

Mom, tell daddy to be brave.

And when I go to Heaven put "Daddy's Girl"

on my grave.

Someone should have taught him

that it's wrong to drink and drive.

Maybe if his mom and dad had,

I'd still be alive.

My breath is getting shorter.

I'm getting really scared.

These are my final moments.

And i'm so unprepared.

I wish that you could hold me, mom

As I lay here and die.

I wish that I could say,

"I love you and good-bye."



Everybody should know not to drink and drive.

Just make sure you never do it.

*qazqaz
  

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zzxcc

16/Female
Hampton, VA
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Posted On: January 22, 2010
awwwwwwwwwwww i wanted to cry great absolutely wonderful
Xx_Pixie_Dust_

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: February 6, 2009
That was a great poem. :]

-Becca
divafyi5

19/Female
Fredericktown, PA
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Posted On: January 18, 2009
That was so sad.Your sure can tell a sad tell.
smile_poptarts

19/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: June 20, 2008
Sad, and so true.

;lily
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