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Hi, my name is Carrot Lee Spice
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I'm Sorry

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By CaRrOt Send DollMail
Created: 2008-08-16 22:07:44 All stories by CaRrOt
He walks up,his promises broken,

he says he needs some time,

to think about all those things.

He says,

a few days later,

he was building up the strength to say,

I'm sorry.

You know he doesn't mean what he says,

he's begging you to stay.

Can you really bring yourself that much pain?

For letting him leave your heart out in the rain?

It's hurt,and he wasn't there,

to wipe away the tears.

He's not sorry,

he just wants you there.

_________________________

Your sorry,

this is the last time,

he will ever beg you to stay.

Your sorry,

but your already on your way.

You can't make it alone,

so your going to leave him alone,

you can't dare to see him with another girl.

You can't dare to stay.

You don't want to stay.

Your sorry,

but he broke all those promises,

that he left your heart in the rain.

Your sorry.

___________________________

He's sorry,

for all those broken promises,

and the unused three words,

he should have told you more.

He's sorry,

for leaving your heart in the rain.

He's sorry,

for everything he said.

He's sorry for not being around.

He's sorry,

you to have to go your sepret ways,

this the last time he'll beg you to stay,

because he knows your on your way....

Sorry.
  

Member Comments  
Biscut21

19/Female
Justin, TX
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Posted On: March 1, 2009
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG.

That was very good.

Again it went deep.

Very deep.

Luvellz it!

Luvellz

Robby--
smile_poptarts

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: August 17, 2008
Very good.

Very sad.

Very, very, very cute.

Ha, Peggie, I used 'very'. I'm awesome.

lol. just kidding.

Love it.

lily ♥
CaRrOt

19/Female
Abraham, WV
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Posted On: August 17, 2008
-laughs-

Stop it! It can't possibly be THAT good!

-giggles-

I have a one rater. Again. Those people just won't leave me alone! I'm gonna hurt the next person who rates down my stories with one star. Again.

Rawr,

[[=Carrot Lee=]]
pinkshine05

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: August 17, 2008
GAAAHHHH!

I always have to scream at your poems they are just AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love nyou sister! As well as the magnificent poem!

[[=Crazy Le=]]
Ink_Thief

19/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: August 17, 2008
CARROT!

Tis amaze.

End of.

I have nothing more to say on the subject.

-Grins and waves before disappearing-
LyingNaked

18/Female
Australia
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Posted On: August 16, 2008
Aw. Carrot, that is so cute... and so really sad. I should have used very, but then I'd be un-Peggie. Anyways. Twas awesome, dearest.

-huggles-

- peggzstickles
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