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Hi, my name is Bethany and Olive
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Hide and Seek

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By Muffin01 Send DollMail
Created: 2009-02-18 01:13:55 All stories by Muffin01
Here's another scary story! It's not very good... but I hope you like it nevertheless! Enjoy!

“Play with me, sis!” cried out Olive for the one hundredth time. “No!” was her older sister’s Bethany’s answer, but Olive kept pestering her over and over again until she finally agreed. Olive wanted to play hide and seek so Bethany counted to ten while Olive hid. Bethany really didn’t feel like playing with Olive, so she just yelled out “Where are you Olive? I can’t find you!” which made Olive believe that she had a good hiding place.

A bit later, their mom asked Bethany whether she wanted to go to the new exhibit at the history museum. Bethany cried out enthusiastically, “Yes!”. Her mom then asked her about Olive. Bethany just replied that Olive was playing with her dolls in her room and didn’t want to be disturbed, so they both went out.

When they got back home, Bethany asked her dad where Olive was. Since Olive hadn’t come out of her room, her dad had assumed that she was sleeping, so that was what he told Bethany and her mom. So as not to disturb Olive, everyone just went to sleep. When Bethany walked into her room, she heard a scraping sound in her trunk. As she opened it, she screamed. Olive had suffocated in the trunk because she was unable to open it. Suddenly, Olive’s ghost appeared. She gave Bethany a wicked smile, walked over to her, and pushed her into the trunk, saying “you found me, sis.” The next morning, Bethany’s parents found her dead in the trunk.
  

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bubblegum_00

15/Female
Portugal
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Posted On: February 28, 2009
Great story! 8D Loved it!
Muffin01

15/Female
Rancho Palos Ver, CA
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Posted On: February 22, 2009
I've never seen it as a chain message. I just made it for a contest for school.
LyingNaked

17/Female
Australia
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Posted On: February 22, 2009
Isn't this a chain message? It's seemingly familiar.

xx pegasus
ravealex

15/Female
Dallas, GA
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Posted On: February 20, 2009
omg that's amazing wow i need to shove my sissy in a trunk ...... lol

your amazing truly

-alex
Muffin01

15/Female
Rancho Palos Ver, CA
All My Stories
Posted On: February 18, 2009
Oops sorry, I meant Bethany.
Brawlin

18/Female
El Salvador
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Posted On: February 17, 2009
pretty creepy! question, did you mean to say leslie in the first paragraph or did you mean bethany?
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