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Hi, my name is Morgan Byrd
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Hate That I Love You -1- (HP)

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By sophie1901 Send DollMailSend Email
Created: 2008-02-17 11:56:30 All stories by sophie1901
First off, I'm new to the whole HP fan-fic stuff, but thought I might have a go at it, so constructive critism would be very helpful.

Also, I take credit for most of the characters, but JK Rowling is really the one I ought to thank cos she ended it with these characters and I am just trying to carry it on, and without her the world of HP wouldn't even exist! You can choose if I do a good job or not =S

Thanks

Sophie

P.S. If you don't like it, then don't read it, nobody’s forcing you to so don't have a go at me, coz I'm just writing it!

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No, Tyler! If you carry on like this I won't let you go to Hogsmede anymore as you always insist on buying that rubbish-"

"How can you say Weasley's Wizard Wheezes is a load of rubbish Mum! It's an awsome shop!" I snorted at her brothers pitiful attempt to convince our mother.

"Yeah, if, like you, you have the mental age of a five year old." Tyler turned to me, smirking.

"Then why don't you like it?" I laughed, raising an eyebrow, but was prevented from retaliating by my mother.

"Shut it Tyler, not another word! Have a good term love," She added, hugging me goodbye, just as a voice rang through the air from the nearest carriage.

"Come on Morgan or there won't be any compartments left!" Morgan turned to see her best friend Albus Potter leaning against one of the doors leading to those blessed compartments. Waving to him, she caught up her bag.

"Laters Fatface! Love you Mum!" she called as she made her way through the hundreds of parents bestowing hugs and kisses on their children to where Albus stood, waiting for her.

"Miss me Al?" she asked, hugging him.

"Well considering the fact that I haven't seen you in, um, 48 hours, then to be fair I haven't really had the chance!" he replied in an amused tone, leading the way onto the train. "Come on, let's see if we can find-" He was drowned out by an excited squeal as Rose Weasley, Al's cousin and one of my best friends and Darcy Franklin, the final best friend of mine came hurtling down the corridor towards us. Darcy smiled broadly as Rose flung her arms around Tyler and me. All three of them had spent the last half of the summer at my house, whilst Tyler had stayed at the Potters with Al's older brother James, much to Rose's disappointment (she fancies my brother.......oh dear). It's strange, but the only time I had ever really met James was the first time I stayed at the Potters in my 2nd year, and it was safe to say that he was one of the most insolant, arrogant, self-centered, obnoxious boy I'd ever had the misfortune to meet. I had no idea why all the girls at Hogwarts were attracted to him, he wasn't really anything special...........maybe it's because he was Seeker on the Gryffindor Quidditch team.......God, some people are so shallow I thought as we finally found an empty compartment.

Half an hour later Darcy had her nose buried in Witch Weekly, Al was busy looking out for the food trolley (I swear the only time that boy moves at any speed food is always present in some shape or form in the equation! Typical!) and Rose and I were discussing when Professor Longbottom (a family friend of both the Potters, the Weasleys and now the Byrd family) was going to pluck up enough courage to ask Professor Lovegood (another friend of the family) out to dinner. The rolling countryside was becoming wilder and more colourful, when a commotion outside signalled the arrival of the food trolley. Al was out of his seat so quick that by the time we three girls had acknowledged the movement and had looked round, all we saw was the compartment door sliding shut and Al's empty seat. Rose laughed, turning to Darcy.

"I honestly think sometimes that he must have some sort of Bottomless Stomach Disorder so he has to eat something every five milliseconds!" I grinned, also turning to Darcy.

"And whilst we're on the subject of Mr Potter, when are you going to get a grip and tell him that you're hopelessly in love with him?"

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sexycharlotte

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Posted On: May 23, 2009
Awesomeness. Great start. Loved the characters. Al seems funny and reminds me alot of one of my best friends. Anyway, luvlez your story dear.

Charley..x x

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