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Hi, my name is ]Subi[

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Ex-Rave Girl ]Poem[

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By Subi

Created: 2008-12-07 01:59:37

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Yeah, once upon a long time ago that was me

Until I was booted right off of the family tree

I was the pretty little raving girl, I took my stand

Always ready to party, glo-sticks in hand

I loved raving with a passion and my hair could prove

Even if I didn't know how to dance, I could groove

It's true I was the little rave girl, her hair dyed bright

With neon green pants, that were a little to tight

My life was going wonderful, that's til he came

I went through the months as his fresh game

Knowing naught of what he was thinking

I'd follow him around without even blinking

A rave girl finding a magical fantasy man

The one that knocked her off the stand

He praised her like she was a Goddess on Earth

But, where was he during the child's birth?

Yeah, once upon a long time ago that was me

Look in the pictures you can clearly see

Sparkling eyes, and a smile that could kill

I always wish that I hadn't taken the pill

That cursed man in the Raving Club

Would've been better off in a dirty pub

I remember how his tricked me into the ways

I was young and didn't know happiness didn't stay

His horrid eyes that stared at me, it was a bother

Horridly that man just happened to be a father

And worst yet for you to hear, about my mother

She'd married the man, who became my child's father

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