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Envy Her 36

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By missmerrygirl Send DollMailSend EmailAIMYIM
Created: 2006-06-12 11:43:51 All stories by missmerrygirl
Poor Mandy gets hurt hear so she has her teddy....

“Mandy, what has gotten into you?” he said, exploding at me.

“If you meant what happened this morning, I’m sorry.”

“Mandy! You know exactly what I mean!”

“So what do you want? I don’t want to keep Allen waiting.”

“Mandy, can’t you see we have a growing relationship here? I love you and you love me.”

“You loved Alyson and then you betrayed her.”

“I thought that love was true.”

“You betrayed my best friend.”

“All right, I’m sorry for that. So, how about you stop the relationship between Allen and you? Really Mandy, I want you back.” He leaned over to kiss me suddenly. He already placed his tender lips to mine but before he started to make out, I flung my head back. I was still in shock.

“David! What are you doing?” I said, flinging my hands into the air.

“Mandy, I want you back,” David said softly, edging closer. I shut my eyes tightly before reopening them. “I want to feel my body against yours…”

“David, this won’t work. Don’t you realize that?” I nearly shouted.

“What’s there to stop us?” David said, in a confused but innocent tone. He continued to edge closer. He wrapped his muscular arms around my waist. I tried to tear away from him.

“I’ve already met Allen and there are a lot more guys I can spend my time in my last two days,” I cried desperately. He leaned his head closer to mine.

“Spend the night with me, Mandy,” he coaxed. I shook my head, still trying to unclasp his fingers.

“Stop it, David! You’re a lady charmer. Why can’t you find someone else even better than me?”

“There is no one else like you. We have a world of our own. You and me, together we can make an everlasting relationship…” he said, letting his voice trailed as he forced our heads to intertwine. I was howling inside of me. Why wouldn’t he let me go?

Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Allen racing for me. He saw the terror in my eyes. He punched Allen’s face. He howled in pain, as I was free. I backed away. He growled menacingly as he inched closer to Allen.

“You took Mandy away from me. She was the love of my life, my dreams, and my hope. You perished everything, you horrible devil!” he breathed hotly. Allen was getting closer into a corner. I stood there, motionless.

There are times when you know you’ve discovered a true love and it hits you hard. I realized how much I loved Allen for everything he was. He was my love and that was for sure. Here he was, saving me from David’s torment.

I realized how much David envied me for everything I had. I took in every opportunity and I let the old ones go. He was such a narcissist that he couldn’t realize all the other people surrounding him. He was so focused on his love for me. He never saw a possibility that I might not be with him at all times.

David was too much for my own good. I thought he had been an angel sent from heaven when all he was a hoax. He tried to convince me our love is true. I was too blind to see that I never did love him.

Allen on the other hand wasn’t so much as a lady charmer. He let bend in my own ways, even in our short period together.

David gave Allen a sudden uppercut. Allen doubled over in pain. I dragged myself away from my thoughts. I dashed forward, taking in the blows that quaked within me. Each blow came with a force of power, of fear, and of anger. After three blows, David realized whom he was punching. I sank to the floor, gasping for the air. My tears couldn’t run. There was too much pain coursing within me. I was beside Allen who looked at me with sad eyes. David sank to the floor beside me.

“No, no, no…Mandy, you weren’t suppose to get involved!” he screamed at me. I saw a crowd drawing near us. Pain shot up at every whisper, every murmur, and every thought. David scooped me up. Everything felt numb for me. I moaned. Oh, Allen…

Allen struggled weakly as he got up. He could barely move as well. I panicked. I could barely speak. I moved my lips but nothing came out. Allen was still on the floor as that was the last I saw of him that day. Feeling so fatigued, I let my eyes close. Allen, Allen, Allen…

Yeah, Nominations are closed because there is a May awards thing going on by Lazalie12. Do write what you think there!
  

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speakr_4_u

20/Female
United Kingdom
All My Stories
Posted On: June 12, 2006
FINALLY! she found sum1 to love truly lol, about time to , awsome, 5 *!
kikkee

16/Female
Astoria, NY
All My Stories
Posted On: June 12, 2006
Oh. My gosh. Absolutely positivley (BAD SPELLING!!!) TOTALLY AWESOME STORY!!! Keep writing, 5 stars!
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