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Hi, my name is Petra
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 5 with 2 vote(s)
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| Created: 2009-06-22 15:48:02 |
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Note- this is gonna be kinda weird- because it takes place during the 1800's- and since I don't know much about that time it might turn out to be horrible, and I'm just too lazy to go and research life in the 1800's- so. Just bare with me. Note- bare is spelled wrong, too.
Well, here's some info. Petra isn't really the main character, the main character is a girl named Rebeka- and maybe her brother, Will, but I haven't really thought about him much yet. And this takes place in Romania- but I can't remember what Coven is in Romania. but it's probably something simple like The Romanian coven. Note, I've been known to forget easily. ;I oh- and I made up the town, too. so ya.
I really hope you guys enjoy this!
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The sun shone down brilliantly on the creek water that ran through the lush, green forest. Birds chirped happily from their nests and deer drank freely from the creek water. Rebeka had never seen such a beautifull day since she was very young, because she had always been kept inside in order to do the chores and clean the kitchen, while on the other hand, her younger brother, Will, had always been taken out by their father to either work in the field or go hunting. Rebeka had always been left at home by herself, due to the fact that that their mother had died in child birth with Will only nine years before- Rebeka had only been three at the time. Rebeka sat against a tree trunk and tried to remember exactly what her mother had looked like. She had been very young, and very beautifull, with misty grey eyes and long, curly black hair that reached to about her hips. Rebeka's aunts and uncles always told her she was alot like her mother, which made Rebeka feel proud. A sudden rustle from the bush next to her brought her back to her senses. Rebeka dashed behind the tree just as a figure stepped out of the bush. Rebeka didn't know what she had expected, but it definately wasn't this; it was a girl. She lookeed to be about thirteen or fourteen, with long, golden brown hair that was tied back in a ponytail that ran down her back. She was extremely pale with dark, black eyes and full blood red lips. She wore a white dress that nearly blended in with her snow-white skin. The girl turned her head to look at Rebeka and her hands instantly shot up to cover her perfect nose. A mix of terror and hunger filled her eyes and covered her face. She took a step backwards as Rebeka stood up slowly and walked towards her.
"Umm..." Rebeka tried to make her voice stop trembling; but something about the girl made her feel afraid. "H-hi. I'm Rebeka." the girl seemed to be fighting the urge to attack her as they shook hands.
"My name is Petra." the look of hunger was still hard in her black eyes as she spoke. Rebeka was finding it harder to hold her stare every second she looked at her perfect face. There was an awkward silence before Rebeka got up the courage to speak again.
"A-Are you lost?" Petra shook her head.
"No. I was just- I was-" Petra 's brow furrowed as she responded. But before Rebeka could ask again, Petra had walked quickly in the other direction and disappeared into the forest.
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Like it? it's okay if you didn't- but atleats leave polite comment telling me what I could do to make it better.
Thanks!
please comment and rate!
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