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Hi, my name is Daddy's broken girl
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Dad I found you on myspace(Please read true story)

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By Nsync_lover Send DollMailVisit WebsiteYIM
Created: 2006-09-10 00:19:15 All stories by Nsync_lover
I'm just a little shaken, because I was just on my myspace account, and I looked up my dad's name in the search, and I found his profile. And it makes me really angry. He put proud parent somewhere on his profile, and he apperantly isn't very proud of me, because we haven't talked in two years, and I haven't seen him since I was three. He called me a few days before Christmas in 2004, he said he would call me in a week or so. But never did. He hasn't called since.

I found you on myspace daddy.

Now I'm Daddy's broken girl.

You make my blood curl.

You make my skin itch.

You hurt me when you say "Proud parent."

Proud of the childeren of whom you speak with.

But the childeren abandoned to live with a missing peice, they do not exist.

You said you would call back, in a few days.

I waited, and waited, until the days were far gone.

Months passed by,

followed by years.

Aren't Daddy's suppose to get rid of their little girls fears?

Daddy I hate you,

Because you don't care.

And when I'm grown up,

You'll wish you were there.

You've missed my birthday's, year after year.

Now I'm 13, and you are not here.

Daddy, your ugly,

from the inside out.

Daddy you broke me,

But I will not pout.

Because Daddy I'm strong.

And I'll move past what you're doing wrong.

You're an evil man, Daddy,

To leave us behind.

And Daddy I cry,

In the back of my mind.

Because Daddy,

I'm broken.

And that's something you cannot fix.

Because Daddy you broke me,

With your lies and your tricks.

I apologized,

When I thought I had hrut you.

But Daddy, you hate me.

But I'll always love you.

Daddy I pray for you,

Every single night.

Hoping that you Daddy,

Will one day see the light.

I still sleep with toy,

the first one I ever got,

that you gave me Daddy,

I never forgot.

And sometimes I lie,

And say I don't care.

But I do care,

that you were never there.

And Daddy I smiled,

When I heard your voice.

But Daddy, now your little girl's made a choice.

A choice to move on,

and leave you behind.

A choice to erase you,

from the back of my mind.

Because you always forget,

But then you remember,

But I will never forget,

that painful December.

You told me in feburary,

A baby sister would come.

That you'd send me some pictures, of her having fun.

But I never got those pictures,

The ones with the fun.

I never got the call,

That I hoped would come.

I wrote letters Daddy,

To tell you I loved you.

But my fairytale, was to good to be true.

I thought I would see you,

That wasn't the first time.

I did everything you asked.

I wrote letters,

Grew out my hair,

Put on a smile,

and the cloths that you sent me,

I was happy to wear.

But now I don't write,

except for my poems.

My hair is cut short,

And my cloths are dark,

I smile at no one.

You missed every tear,

and every laugh,

You're missing my futuer,

and You missed my past.

And when you are gone,

I will cry,

Because I never knew my Daddy,

Before the day he died.

I'm crying, because all of this is bringing up memories I don't want to revive. And I hope I do meet my Daddy, while he's still alive. Crap,... I can't stop rhyming...
  

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CRiMsoNxXxteAR

20/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: October 6, 2007
Wow.Good for you. you seem really strong I wish I was more like you. That was a really sad poem but I can totally relate.

I've totally lost hope my parents haven't been home since I was like 3 months old because of work and buisness trips. They always get home when asleep and leave before I wake up. I tried to wait for them for a while and then just gave up. They just hate me because I'm not the smart talented girl they want me to be.
Nsync_lover

20/Female
Colorado Springs, CO
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Posted On: August 9, 2007
thank you all so much for the support that you guys are giving me.

just so you all know... I've started talking with my dad... he calls me every friday... he's still really immature... and he lies a lot... but I am really happy that I'm talking with him...

thank you all again so much.

this all really helped me.
tf_girl6

22/Female
Chana, IL
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Posted On: July 26, 2007
that is sad. my dad is like that to kinda, not as bad though. he abandoned me because i got extremely sick and he couldn't handel the responcibilities and wanted to just skate board instead, we almost starved to death that winter and some of the following...i hate me dad. if you need sum1 to talk to ever dollmail me, i know every now and again i need to talk about my dad.5*
LiViNgDeAdGrL

22/Female

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Posted On: July 26, 2007
That is really good! It made me cry! I hope everything goes as you want it to! I'm so sorry for you! I hope you feel better! I know poems make me feel better!
original_autho

18/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: July 26, 2007
That was sad, and very good.



Spirit_Chaser2

23/Female
Williamstown, WV
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Posted On: July 26, 2007
Wow. Sad, deep, and really really good.
ak12soraven

19/Female
Greenfield, IN
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Posted On: April 5, 2007
That was deffenetly a strong story! I hope u see him!
CRAZY_BOB

19/Female
Amf Ohare, IL
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Posted On: December 27, 2006
i am sorry. i never thought that that would ever exist. but i am blind to see that and you're right, you are strong. i would probably cry myself to sleep and have nightmares every night and wander my retless life around but you are truly strong. i admire you. you are a true hero to girls everywhere.
bloomyg

19/Female
Syracuse, NY
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Posted On: December 24, 2006
It is so good! It's sosad at the same time! Wow some people just have great potential to be writers somedya.

(I am not one of those people.)
greywolfcat2

21/Female
Casselberry, FL
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Posted On: December 18, 2006
that is a great poem.Very sad though.But I can understand.My dad is a drunk and every day he goes to the bar and whenever I do see him he is fighting with my mom or drunk.So.....Yeah I know what u r going through.But great poem.Love it.
suga2suga

23/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: December 9, 2006
Gawd that is so sad ... What a horrible thing you're daddy did to you. I get mad at my daddy sometimes because he isn't here a ton either, but i know it's for the best sometimes. And I still see him. Anyway, 5 stars. If u ever need someone to talk to, you can always dm me. I know we don't know eachother, but nonetheless... ^__^ Anyway, ttyl--- suga
nguyrach

107/Female
Canada
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Posted On: December 9, 2006
OMG. That is so sad... I hope you feel better tho
ashlee_rox_873

24/Female
Philippines
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Posted On: December 9, 2006
omg that was to sad i hope you met your dad sometimes im hert but that was the past but every time i move i have to move fast for my heart gets broken a lot of the time but never as much as your heart this time
Lover51

107/Female
Beverly Hills, CA
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Posted On: December 9, 2006
jordanashley

105/Female
Loraine, TX
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Posted On: December 9, 2006
That's so sad! I'm sorry about what happened... That just makes me sick that some people do that to their kids...
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