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Cross Creek Rose (c)

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Story Rating   4.8  with 5 vote(s)
By designing_till_fab Send DollMail
Created: 2009-08-09 15:32:45 All stories by designing_till_fab
"Your turn," Nalek said.

Yendor positioned himself ready, and waited.

"Truth or dare?" Ekim asked.

Yendor could still barely manage his lips, as the words came out. The words came out one way, and his lips moved the other.

"Dare," He said finally.

Ekim whispered in Nalek’s ear, as Yendor waited.

"No, that’s stupid." He said.

Nalek’s face had soon become a large toothy grin.

"I’ve got it!" He said.

"I dare you to go into Cross Creek Rose’s house" He stated.

Yendor shook his head.

"Nope, not even. If I go, y-you two are coming in w-with me." Yendor said.

Nalek nodded, as the trio rose to their feet. Nalek’s sister Ahsillek walked outside.

"Nalek" She said.

Nalek walked over to the dirt road beside his house to greet his elder.

"What?" He asked.

Ahsillek looked at him in disbelief.

"You better not go into that freak’s house Nalek." Nalek rolled his eyes, and crossed back to meet his cousins.

"Ekim, she says that every time." Yendor said.

The two walked, and Yendor hunched, as he grunted making his way onto Cross Creek Rose’s driveway. Outside, hung a long rope stretching across the front porch, the boys stared.

"Wait, a-aren’t wet cl-clothes ‘sposed to go up there?"

Yendor asked. Nalek slapped the back of his head as they all walked to the front door of the house. Ahsillek didn’t say anything; she made her way into the house to mind her own. Ahsillek was the queen bee. Didn’t think twice when it came to tattling. Ahsillek basically took care of herself, she was independent all right. She cooked for herself, cleaned for her parents, and took care of Nalek. Though only thirteen, she treated eight-year-old Nalek like a son.

**It’s all I got at this moment, rate nicely please**

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Alyssah
  

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designing_till

14/Female
Riverview, FL
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Posted On: August 9, 2009
OKay. It's not like its' getting published.

It's a true storyy smart one. And If you read, Idiot, you'd know. Bet yhuu feel like a dumbfu.ck :]
Kittie_Kris

17/Female
Winston Salem, NC
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Posted On: August 8, 2009
I was confused at first truthfully @_@ I got it down though but I agree, when someone talks they should have their own line.
Junk

72/Male
Broken Arrow, OK
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Posted On: August 8, 2009
To be perfectly honest with you, I wasn't feeling it.

Not that it has to be realistic, but the names were completely ridiculous.

Please learn to use the enter key. Individual quotations have their own line. They're not all jumbled up in the same paragraph. It makes it difficult to read.

designing_till

14/Female
Riverview, FL
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Posted On: August 7, 2009
Note;

Names are backwords :]

And Ahsillek's my mom, and Nalek & Yendor are my uncles.
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