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Hi, my name is Kayla
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Conspiracy-preface

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By FaLlInG_AnGeL_2005 Send DollMail
Created: 2012-07-09 03:03:56 All stories by FaLlInG_AnGeL_2005
Conspiracy

The sun was looming closer to the horizon, where the earth met the red tinted sky.

Sunset.

This was my last day unless I found what these people were looking for.

But I was completely lost.

I couldn’t take me eyes of the beautiful ocean, as it changed colors with the passing time.

Well, I thought, if this is going to be my last day to live might as well be here.

This place… where everything started.

Where I got myself in this mess to begin with.

I took off my shoes, and dangled my feet into the cold water from the wooden dock.

I closed my eyes and imagined what I would be doing if this all didn’t happen,

a normal girl.

I would be done with Collage by now. Maybe I would be off living my dream…

Heck, sipping on my first Alcoholic drink, in a bar with all my friends.

My stomach churned.

it’s been so long since I’ve seen them. I couldn’t even say how long…

BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP

My wishing thoughts faded with the alarm. My eyes drifted down to the bracelet tightly wrapped around my tanned wrist.

They started their hunt for me.

I probably have about an hour before they find me.

My first thought was RUN, but I know they would catch me eventually. No one gets away. EVER.

Or… I could try to finish what they sent me to do. Maybe I can put all the pieces together before they get here.

That’s what I’ll do.

I grasped on to the ledge of the dock, and pushed off into the ocean.
  

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xmizzmalaboox

18/Female
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Posted On: July 10, 2012
You know this sounds pretty interesting.

It's just that it doesn't have many details and you don't explain too much either. And the format, it looks like a poem. Use paragraphs.

But if this is a poem, I'm sorry. It just doesn't seem like it.

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