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Can an Outfit Complete A guy's Heart? *5*

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By pinkshine05 Send DollMail
Created: 2008-08-22 14:56:48 All stories by pinkshine05
A/N: Hey, guys sorry for the long wait. I had to finish up my other series "In The Depths Of Despair Love." i hope you guys don't mind. There a lot of drama in this chapter hope you like it. ^^

Enjoy.

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Recap of Chapter 4:

“Candice! Candice! Wait!” A male’s voice called. It sounded…like…Tyler! “Yeah.” I said, trying not to sound nervous. “I just wanted to make sure if you were okay, after what happened in class today.”

“Oh, yeah. I feel okay…I guess. Thanks anyway…” I said a bit husky. “Well, I also want to continue, where we left off at last night’s concert.” He said grinning. We headed for a bench. “What? What do you mean?” I said, while recollecting, my memory.

“I want to ask you to be my girlfriend.” He clarified, by asking me the question, which was related to the almost-kiss yesterday. “I-I’d love to.” I croaked in total shock, while forgetting that he already had a girlfriend.

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Chapter 5:

His lips reached out as I leaned forward, until my mind had an interior astonishment. “Wait!” I started. “What about Kaila?”

“Oh, I dumped her yesterday, at the concert for pulling me away from you.” He said serenely, without hesitation.

“Oh,” I said as my body relaxed. This was the moment I’ve been waiting for, my first factual kiss. A genuine kiss that would occur today at this minute, without any disruptions. Ahh.

“Um, wait Candice. I’m sorry, I can’t do this.” Tyler sighed, a nervous sigh. “Do what?” I asked confused.

“I never dumped Kaila, I really like you but Kaila’s been my girlfriend for so long, and I just can’t give up on her.” He said in a calm, but croaky voice.

“Oh, well that’s okay…I have…a boyfriend too. I just forgot…” I lied, pretending to smile. “Okay, then that makes both of us officially un-girlfriend and boyfriend. Hah.” He said sheepishly.

“Yeah.” I said, as I stood up. “I’ll see you later.”

I walked off with my bag, as I put my hands in my jean skirt pockets. I was acceptably, a liar once again, and a total fake. I can’t believe I told him, I had a boyfriend! Since when? I don’t even know my fake boyfriend’s name! I have to find out a way to do something about this lie. Most of all why did he have to interrupt before the kiss, why couldn’t he do that after it was done!

“Hey, Candice!” Carin and Jen said, as they joined my walk over to my cabin.

“I got great news!” Shouted Cairn, as if her excitement couldn’t bore me enough.

“I don’t,” I muttered, “so what’s the great news?”

“I asked a couple of the guys from the lacrosse team, if we could join them at the swimming pool!” Cairn said, while giving me a “you know you want to” look. “Cairn and I planned it out 10 minutes ago, let’s go get ready!” Jen exclaimed, gleefully.

“You guys, as much as I want to…I can’t.” I said, remorsefully.

“Why not? It’ll be fun! Remember how you denied going to the concert and when we convinced you, you have fun? So try it, there will be a lot of cute guys!”

I opened the cabin door with my keys and walked in, as I continued the conversation. “If I go, will you guys stop bothering me?” I asked, my voice, a bit droned. “Yep!”

I decided, I should go but I only went for Cairn and Jen. I didn’t even want to get out of the cabin and face, lying to Tyler again. I maybe lie a lot, but my lies are beyond nothing compared to others.

I set my shoulder bag, on the dresser as I wiped the makeup off, with a soft tissue. I wouldn’t want mascara dripping down, at the pool. I brushed my hair, and took the knots out. Locks of hair hung around my shoulders, as I created a bun, and clipped it at the nape of my neck. “So, girls what swim suit are you going to wear?” I asked as I sponged my lip gloss off.

“Swim suits? Girl, we wear bikinis.” Jen said, making a face. “Right…” As embarrassing that was, I don’t even have a bikini, and I still wear a training bra, and I’m in high school.

“I just forgot to bring one.” I lied, once again. Me and my lies, we never stop. “Oh, I have an extra here.” Cairn offered as she tossed it over to me.

It was definitely cute, but revealing. Well duh, it’s a bikini, how dumb could I get? Anyway I liked it but I would absolutely feel uncomfortable around boys in this.

When we all came out in our bikinis, we all looked wow. Even though they laughed at my training bra, I came out looking great. I took my diary just in case I wanted to write in it.

***

The pool was jammed with guys, even a few girls. Some were already making out. I didn’t feel good, I felt nervous tension. So I didn’t go inside the pool, I just sat on the edges.

“Isn’t this awesome?” Jen asked.. “Um, yeah.”

“Hey, I’ll get one of the guys to have a talk with you.”

Before I could say “no,” she brought a cute, lacrosse team guy here. He was cuter than Tyler but for sure I knew this wasn’t the time. “Uh…hi.” I sputtered.

“Hey, you look nice.” He said coolly, as he checked me out. Yep this was definitely uncomfortable…

I sat up straight in discomfort. “So, you want to get inside the pool?” He asked, as he touched my back. I shivered in anxiety. “Uh…okay…” I told him even though I totally didn’t mean it.

He pulled me in, as I felt his hands touch my shoulders. He looked at me the exact way Tyler did, at the concert. “I don’t think we introduced each other. I’m Chris.” He said as he swam closer to me. I backed away.

“Yeah, I’m Candice.” For some reason, I didn’t feel croaky or as much tension as when I talked to Tyler. “I have to—”

He then held the back of my stomach and dragged me closer to this exposed abs. I felt myself sweat even though I was in water. His lips came closer to mine, as his hands stroked my cheek. I suddenly pushed away. He tried to grab me back, but I stopped him.

“I’m sorry, Chris.” I whispered as I hurled my body toward the shallow end. I didn’t say a word. I placed my leg on the bank of the pool, as I climbed out. As I grabbed a towel, Chris came after me.

“Look, if you didn’t want to kiss me, that alright. I want to ask you out,” he said, “think about it.” He rested his palm on my shoulder then walked away. Before I even got to say anything, he left me with a no decidable question, and a stomach ache, from the lies and unnerving scenes.

I gave a why-is-this-happening-to-me groan, as I draped the towel around my soaked body. What was I going to say to Chris? I didn’t even like him. If I just told him that I wasn’t interested that would crush him. Being eliminated out of a love assurance is pretty unsympathetic.

I settled in a hammock, while I lugged out my diary from my bag.

Dear diary,

What’s worse? Lying to the guy that you’ve always liked or wanting to dump a guy that you don’t even know about? This situation was of poorer quality than ever. Tyler is the hottest and my dream guy I’ve ever wanted, (well since I saw him in the bus) but on the other hand there’s Chris who’s a laid-back lacrosse player who is cute but….well, not my type. Sitting in a hammock writing in my diary, while Cairn and Jen are with cute guys in a pool, isn’t what I (or anyone) would call a perfect scenario. Have you ever seen in movies where the foremost girl is always at the right place at the right time to make an ideal setting? I’ve always dreamed of my first kiss like that. Beneath the sunset, at a beach where the waves crush adjacent to your ankles…and then it happens! But so I’ve heard most kissing scenes in authenticity are most known as usual, accidental places and not the movie type. Well can you blame life? No you can’t, because well movies are set up but not realistic kisses (unless someone is setting you up.) Anyway back to Tyler and Chris. I have a feeling Chris is just those guys who want girl’s because they’re desperate. Like right when he saw me, he tried to kiss me. If he was an actor in a movie he would noticeably get fired…well not fired but he’d have to do a lot of re-doing. Tyler, he takes things sort of slow, but we’re not talking centuries slow…well I just hope I take the right path and fix up my lies.

-Candice

I closed my diary as I stuffed it back in my bag. I observed what was going on, in the pool. Looks like Cairn met someone interesting, not that I was interested. Jen seems to be playing pool tag, with a lot of guys. Wait…there was one guy who looked familiar, it was…Mac!

I spotted him walking by, as he gave a little greeting, “hey,” he started as he sat down beside me, “so I didn’t know you were here.”

“Well, I didn’t know that you were a lacrosse player.” I told him back, flashing a grin. “Actually I’m not, I’m a close friend of one of the lacrosse players. They invited me.” He said, as he sipped on some orange juice.

“Oh, cool.” I said, not knowing what to say. “Anyways—”

“Hey! What you doing with my girlfriend?!” I heard someone say behind me. I hoisted my head back and saw Chris. “Girlfriend? I didn’t even answer yet.” I told him, as I stood up. “Move aside.” Chris warned.

I was confused at what was happening. “I’m just a friend of hers, relax man.” Mac explained. “Doesn’t look like it!” Chris snarled.

Chris seized Mac’s wrist as he clouted at his cheek. I gasped in horror. “Stop, you guys!” I yelled, though as if they’d listen to me.

“Oh, so you want to play, huh?” Mac grinned evilly, as he elbowed him in the abs. Chris nastily pulled him down to the base of the wet tiled pool floors. They tackled each other as everybody stared at the brutal fight, between both guys.

I couldn’t take any more of the guy fights, and thinking that Chris thought Mac was flirting with me, as well as him already thinking that I accepted his girlfriend offer.

“STOP!” I shouted loudly. Everyone stopped everything, it was so quiet I could hear a pin drop, but nothing happen, it was silence. “Mac, is just a friend,” I started, “and Chris, I never even answered if I wanted to be your girlfriend or not.” I finally said.

A/N: There are very few mistakes, please don't kill me...I was very intense at that moment, while I was writing..hehe. *__*
  

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bella_girl

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Posted On: July 14, 2009
I would smack a boy if he ever did that to me.
princess_nikki

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KEEP GOING!

KEEP GOING!

*bites fingernails*

5/5
Sharmy06

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Posted On: September 1, 2008
OMG this is AWSOME!!! Write the next chapter too and call me! hehe! LOL!
shootlikeagirl

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Posted On: August 24, 2008
That was really good and yeah alot of drama but I think she should date Mac and Chris would have been dead if he did that to Mac!

*Hugs Mac*

Forget Chris!! And Tyler
t_wilight

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Posted On: August 24, 2008
That was so amazingly awesome.

Chris is...weird.

I'm not too fond of Tyler, either.

But I like Mac.

^_^

Keep me updated, love.

.::..::jen::..::.

[{laughs}]
lola7

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Posted On: August 24, 2008
Ahhh.

It was a total sum of awesomer than awesome.

^^

((Lola))
Emo_Cutie_

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Posted On: August 24, 2008
That was just AMAZING!!!!

`.`Emoness`.`
designing_till

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Posted On: August 23, 2008
5 stars
rocky095

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Posted On: August 23, 2008
awesome

-stef
Tragedy_Strkie

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Posted On: August 23, 2008
Love it!
sweetstylingir

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Posted On: August 23, 2008
That was awesome! It was enirely great. ^.^

I'd be glad, if you kept me posted. Thanks. =]

S / W \ E / E\ T/ S\
third

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Posted On: August 23, 2008
Sorry Kat3 but he's mine! LOL!

I loved it, keep me posted. ^^

---------------> ThirD
Kat3

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Posted On: August 23, 2008
Mac, is wow, I love him...he is mine!

Mwhahaha! And chris...ew.

I just love the way you discribe things!
cute71

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Posted On: August 23, 2008
Wow...all I could say is...DRAMA!!!!
brutusdog

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Posted On: August 22, 2008
But, Chris could be used against Tyler MUAHAHAHA XP

5*s OOOOH WORTH THE WAIT

I NEED MORE

Mac is cool XP

Brutie
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