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By CaRrOt Send DollMail
Created: 2008-09-23 19:47:45 All stories by CaRrOt
What's up? Carrot Lee here to tell you that I'm starting yet ANOTHER HP fan fic.

As many of you know I'm hooked on those books and have to feed my starving imagination loads of Harry Potter. I'm here to tell you that I'm starting another but this time it's NOT going to be the same like it normally is.

It's going to be like a forbidden love type thing. I've heard the idea before and I hope the person who I read it from (I'm to think to remember who) doesn't get mad at me for sorta copying their idea.

It's going to be about a Slytherin girl who falls for a Gryffindor boy. I just made up this story and I'm going to let you create me a character! I need some characters and it just all makes sense doesn't it?

-laughs a little then stops when the crowd remains quite-

Right. Ahem. Okay!

Well I'm going to give you background information on the main girl and boy. Here you go:

Name: Crystal Aliane Snape (This is Snape's great great grandmother)

Age: 11

Gender: Female

House: Slytherin

Hair Color: Changes to her whim

Eye Color: Changes to her whim

Status: Pure Blood

Parents: Ocliste and Severus Snape (Snape has now been named after his great great great grandfather XD)

Other: Crystal never knew that she would end up in Slytherin. Her mother always seemed to nice for Slytherin even though her father fit the mold perfectly. Ocliste knew the fate that awaited her daughter for she is a Seer though nobody but Severus knows it. Ocliste was a Slytherin herself but nobody ever talked to her much. She was friends with Myrtal at school and everyone thought she was weird.

Then Ocliste met Severus.

Severus didn't know WHAT he was getting into whenever he met Ocliste. Soon they got married and he found out she was a Seer when she told him she was going to have a baby girl in two years time and her name would be Crystal Aliane Snape and she would be a Slytherin like them. Ocliste also told her husband that their daughter would be a Metamorphmagus. So she was.

Crystal is born and in a eleven years time her parents are dropping her off at Hogwarts with all the other new students and old ones. Her eyes fall on a handsome boy that she doesn't know his name and she feels her heart flutter.

Crystal goes into Hogwarts and everything changes. She meets new friends and become a tad bit popular with the in crowd. She tries to spend much of her time around the Gryffindors but meets her downfall harshly. She's a smart girl who has a sharp tongue and is CONSTANTLY getting into trouble.

There's Crystal. I know she sounds like a TOTAL prep--but she isn't. Believe me.

Name: Peyton Jackson Caldin

Age: 11

Gender: Male

House: Gryffindor

Hair Color: Black

Eye Color: Brown

Status: Pure Blood

Parents: Summer and Jackson Caldin

Other: Peyton's parents were both named after famous Muggles that nobody knows about. He has Muggle loving grandparents and finds it annoying he was given such a un-wizardly name. He wants to change his name as soon as he gets to Hogwarts but then finds that no other names suits him. He soon finds out that even if the creators of the Hogwarts Houses didn't like each other doesn't mean that others can't. He falls for a pretty Hufflepuff,beautiful Ravenclaw and a gorgeous Slytherin.

Forbidden Love.

Never did he expect that she liked him to. Summer and Jackson are normal wizards who (like the soon to come Weasleys) live in a house held together by magic it's so old. Most of Peyton's family lives in his house but not many people know that. He is an extraordinary wizard and nobody would ever think that he was so poor.

Name: Lillian Rose Black (Sirius's great great grandmother)

Age: 11

Gender: Female

House: Slytherin

Hair: Red

Eyes: Brown

Status: Half-Blood

Parents: Amontha and Mark Black

Other: Lily was shocked and surprised to find that most people who attend Hogwarts were Muggles or half-bloods. She is the only one in her whole entire House who is a half-blood but doesn't feel to bad whenever a Muggle starts to attend the next year.

Amontha was a pure blood wizard who feel for a Muggle when she was out shopping with her mother one year. She married Mark as soon as her mother died from a deadly illness which took her fathers life to. She took Mark into the Wizarding World where he could never truly fit in. He soon become used to the magical surroundings and is shocked whenever his daughter Lily is asked to come to Hogwarts which he THINKS is a good thing.

Lily be-friends a girl named Crystal and they strength a bond nobody could even break. She helps Crystal over come fears and obstacle's. Lily is much like Crystal being quick witted but she is overly sarcastic.

Okay! Those are the main characters! Here's a form you can fill out and I'll try to take in all the characters I can but no promises on that my dear friends. None at all. Here's the fill out form: (The one's with the stars behind them are mandatory)

Name*:

Age*:

Gender*:

Hair*:

Eyes*:

House*:

Status:

Parents:

Other:

Thanks oh so much! I'll try really hard to get as many characters into the story that I can. Anybody who posts here will automatically be updated. Sorry if you didn't want to be but your going to because you didn't bother to read this sentence at the very end where I plainly stated that you would be updated for posting.

XD

I kill myself.

Rawr,

--Carrot Lee Spice--
  

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amberh081093

18/Female
Tucson, AZ
All My Stories
Posted On: February 10, 2009
did this already come out? is it too late to help? if not:

Name*:

sara lindburg

Age*:

14

Gender*:

girl

Hair*:

short black and spikey

Eyes*:

charcoal black

House*:

gryfndor

Status:

she dosen like the thought of status so if you ask her she'll jst give you the bird

Parents:

she is an orphan and was adopted by some strangers and never knew her real heritage, just that she was a witch

Other:

she has a pet bat named cuddles that can change into a rat on its own she hates every one and wishes that she was in slytherin. she even wheres green stripes in her hair
Emo_Girl_12345

20/Female
Longview, TX
All My Stories
Posted On: January 2, 2009
Name*: Bella Tanisha Riddle (Great Great Grandmother of Voldemort)

Age*: 15

Gender*: Female

Hair*: A bright pink that she wears in a long emo cut. There are neon blue streaks in her bangs that go over her eyes.

Eyes*: Her eyes are a dull brown, but she wears contacts that make them rainbow. The colors going from the pupil are: Green, blue, red, yellow, and purple.

House*: Ravenclaw

Status: Both parents are muggles.

Parents: Hugh Jones Riddle and Louise Diane Brown (Her mother got re-married to George Cain Brown.)

Other: Uhhhh.......

..::Cassi::..
CaRrOt

19/Female
Abraham, WV
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
Good god!

I send out links and then I come to check it and...BAM!

You guys overflowed me!

TWO PAGES!

I hope I have all of your permission to change the characters if I need to.

Mind you,I might have to change the looks for I'm not a talented dollmaker but I shall try my best. Hogwarts is closed off from the actual year in the Muggle world which is around the 1900's but I'm to lazy to make them talk like that and such so they will be talking like we normally do and the Muggle's think they are abnormal. (Not much of a shock there)

I will try to use as many characters as I possibly can,Peggie I'm sorry but Baby doesn't really fit the mold for this story.

XD

I'll make a charcter like her though just for you!

Rawr,

[[=Carrot Lee=]]
Original_scree

20/Female
Zionsville, IN
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
Felt like you needed one more of my fantabulous characters....Don't use if you don't want to.

Name: Joseph Avrams

Age: 13

Gender: Decidedly Male

Hair: Dark brown and curly.

Eyes: Green

House: Slytherin

Status: Pureblood. And proud of it.

Parents: Thomas and Hestia Avrams

Other: He's Susan's obnoxious cousin. A snob, and a bit of a lady's man. He hangs around Edmund, who allows himself to be pulled around by Joseph. They aren't really friends. Joseph doesn't have friends. He has admirers, and the ones he thinks would be valuable allies he lets stay.

--0Rii
Telephone

17/Female
Las Vegas, NV
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
Name*: Abigail Aldrich-Wincer

Age*: 12

Gender*: Female

Hair*: Dark blonde and falls halfway down her back

Eyes*: Greyish blue, normally framed with brown eyeliner pencil

House*: Ravenclaw

Status: Muggle Born x3

Parents: an unknown father, Alice Wincer, Aldrich was her Father's name, but Alice refuses to tell her kids about him

Other: Ehh? Personality? Intelligent, reserved but always watches what goes on, only talks if necessary, easily ignored. She has a mixed race younger brother (her Mum was only sixteen when she had her and a lil bit of a sluut) and half mixed race younger sister, and her Mum is pregnant with twins. She is the eldest.

SilverWinterWa

17/Female
Fredericktown, PA
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
I OVE THIS!!!!!! KEEP ME UPDATED=-]
Ink_Thief

19/Female
United Kingdom
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
I wanna be kept updated, but all characters in my mind are, like, only half formed, so I cannot donate yet. Mybe tomorrow :]
Baby_Gurl_4eva

18/Female
Ireland
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
*quiet
Baby_Gurl_4eva

18/Female
Ireland
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
*speaks

*Died
Baby_Gurl_4eva

18/Female
Ireland
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
Name:Evalyn Harris

Age:11

Gender:Female

Hair:Long and aurburn

Eyes: Sorta.....aqua hazel

House:You pick

Status:Hmmmmmmmmm...you pick

Parents: Bea and Matthew Harris

Other:She's Uber strong minded, yet also very quiite, she won't speal up for 'The populars.' Yet will for the little people. Bites her nails.Has good intentions, yet often gets detention for backtalking. Kind of girl who will have witty comebacks. Mums dead. Deid mysteriously.

Fathers determind for her to be in the same house as his...things turn out differently.

LyingNaked

18/Female
Australia
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
I'd help, but I'm not feeling very creative. Good luck, and keep me posted. Oh. I think you should use Baby. Because she's awesome.

xx pegg
Original_scree

20/Female
Zionsville, IN
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
By the way, you should probably inform people that this story takes place in the early 1900's. Some of the characters don't seem to fit the times.

--0Rii
Original_scree

20/Female
Zionsville, IN
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
I want to give you one more character. Can I? Susan has an obnoxious cousin. If you dont' want my crappy characters just let me know and I'll stop.

--0Rii
Original_scree

20/Female
Zionsville, IN
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
Name: Edmund Ruthwick

Age: 13

Gender: Decidedly Male

Hair: Dark brown. Usually neatly combed.

Eyes: Muddy green, not quite hazel.

House: Slytherin.

Status ure-blood

Parents: Oliver and Adelia Ruthwick

Other: He's Susan's betrothed. He's a nice kid and all. It's hard for people to see why he's in Slytherin. He's all for forsaking his heritage and starting a new life somewhere that people dont' know and respect his family name. A dreamer, he often talks to Susan about the idea of running away to some foreign country. He and Susan are friends, but not much more than that.

(Actually, that's Edmund's secret. He does not swing that way. Thus, he is a bit miffed that his marriage and everything is already all worked out. His parents know about him, but think they can "cure" it if they push him hard enough. ((Btw, if you can't write this part of him, then you don't have to)))

--0Rii
Original_scree

20/Female
Zionsville, IN
All My Stories
Posted On: September 24, 2008
Name: Susan Carters

Age: 11

Gender: Female

Hair: Light blonde. It's very fair and soft. Almost fluffy in texture. She wears it short, in a pixie cut.

Eyes: Gray

House: Hufflepuff

Status: Pureblood

Parents: Horatio and Agnes Carters

Other: She is a constant disappointment to her parents, who wanted her to be in Slytherin or at least Ravenclaw. She's led a very closed in life, with everything being prepared for her ahead of time. She even has an arranged marriage. Or she did. Her parents are trying to fix it back up at the moment or get her switched into Slytherin. Susan is content to let it fall through, but if it doesn't she'll marry the boy. She's very passive aggressive, not a very independent girl, but she has a soft-spoken kind of grace about her. She's smart--book smart--but she hasn't figured out how to solve her own problems yet.

Have fun, Carrot. ^____^

--0Rii
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