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Bree Is A Farie ((This is not stupid))

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By keeker99 Send DollMail
Created: 2008-12-11 17:47:46 All stories by keeker99
CHAPTER ONE Bree was born of many siblings. Brothers, sisters. Many adopted. Many babies. As Bree grew up to be nine, she thought something was strange about her and her family, but, she never knew what it was. Soon, she was sixteen. She always thought everyone hated her, although, a boy named Derek liked her-alot. He looked at her in classes they took together. Nobody ignored her. Only when she wasn't payng attention, that is. She went to BusterJohnson High. She was beautiful. Blonde hair, sparkling blue eyes, and, wore fabulas clothes. he most amazing thing she had, she didn't know yet-She was a blue WinterFrost Farie. Everytime she looked at people, her deep blue eyes glittered. Her sparkling, white teeth stood out when she laughed or smiled. Her siblings would go to school. The adults would move out, taking babies and children and marrying other adopted children and having a huger family. Bree did everything fast. She would always say, " You guys are totally sluggish." She'd always giggle when she said that. She'd stuff her face and then send lunch chating with her friends. Sharon, the coolest, most popular girl in school, looked snottily at Bree and flipped her long black hair back. She groan and mumble about Bree. She'd spread rumors about Bree. bree had just about had enough. She was good in everything and loved school. " Hey Sarah! Hey Belle! Hey, Nina. Waz up Nora?" She called out to her best friends. Derek walked over to mrs. Joss. "Mrs. Joss, don't we have the fall dance this Saturday?" He wondered. He watched the old teacher erase the board. "Yes. Of course, don't we always?" She said putting down the eraser. "Um...yeah. It's just-" He almost finished when Mrs.Joss said, " Well, why wouldn't you remember? Your always great in events. You always win pep rally and always help with the dances and do nice things for people." Mrs. Joss said with a puzzled look on her face. " I like this girl, Bree and want to ask her to the dance. But, I'm too shy to do it. What should I do?" He said not looking up. Bree was right there too. " Hey Derek. Can I speak to you in private?" "Go for it, Derek." Said Mrs. Joss with a short grin and wink. He waved slowly. Bree and him held hands to the outdoors of school. "Were you talking about me?"Bree choked out. Bree and Derek stared into each other's eyes."You have beautiful eyes." Derek gulped. Bree laughed. They slowly moived closer and kissed. They went back as girlfriend and boyfriend. This was great. Except............
  

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keeker99

42/Female
Escanaba, MI
All My Stories
Posted On: August 19, 2009
Thanks
Pepsiphone

17/Female
Canada
All My Stories
Posted On: December 11, 2008
she means she doesn't think you have very original characters. but i think it's cool.
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