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Hi, my name is Killer
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Bloody, Killer Says Bye (Poem)

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Story Rating   4.9  with 10 vote(s)
By sarahco777 Send DollMail
Created: 2009-08-01 16:54:54 All stories by sarahco777
Twisting, turning, crackling

Burnt, split open sapling

Wrathful, evil lightning

Like him in many ways

On this cold, forgotten day

A scream, she’s dead

Fell down upon her head

Bloody, killer says bye

His eyes are clouded over, misty

Was it, well, did he?

Flash of hope in that face

Forgotten with the smack of the mace

Bloody, killer says bye

Tears collected in his eyes

He says his goodbyes

A murderer can’t hope to live

Unless he learns to give

Bloody, killer says bye

The dagger reaches his throat

And slits it open, death so close

The people say hurray

But it doesn’t seem like a happy day

Bloody, killer says bye

Locked up in the casket

To pay his debt
  

Member Comments  
eliginorski

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: August 9, 2009
That was sad...but I did like it a lot.
Jennabobenna

20/Female
Oakland, OR
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Posted On: August 3, 2009
I second Farm, and also Rose.
flying_waffles

18/Female
Ashville, OH
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Posted On: August 3, 2009
wow. thats sad.... but really good!

*Mrs. Malfoy*
t_wilight

16/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: August 2, 2009
Definetly...different. ;3

((Kat))
Kittie_Kris

17/Female
Winston Salem, NC
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Posted On: August 2, 2009
It was sad to me in the end

But over all it was wonderful! I wouldn't have a clue to why it had the feelings of sadness, happiness, and then sadness again but that's just me. I agree it is powerful ^^
PinkRoseTears

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: August 2, 2009
I think it’s super powerful.

(:

--Rose
XxCoLoRxHeArTx

21/Female
Fredericktown, PA
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Posted On: August 1, 2009
Even though it is pretty scary I still love it next time you write a poem DollMail me kk

*HeArT
Farm

103/Female
Canada
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Posted On: August 1, 2009
I like it a lot.
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